聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer should be more natural and clear. Avoid redundancy and incorrect phrases like "I'm very working during working". Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you like chatting with friends, and how it helps you relieve stress.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax. Since I work in a high-pressure environment, talking with my colleagues allows me to relieve stress and feel more comfortable.

建議: The answer lacks clarity and coherence. Use clear topic sentences and specific details. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

範例: Usually, I chat about everyday life and the culture around us. For example, recently I talked with my coworker about our supportive and kind boss, which made our work environment pleasant.

建議: Improve sentence structure and avoid hesitation. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly. Also, correct grammar mistakes like "one friends" should be "one friend".

範例: I prefer talking with only one friend because I don't enjoy noisy places. However, at work, I sometimes have to talk with many colleagues at the same time.

建議: Answer is incomplete and unclear. Use complete sentences and clear explanations. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and avoid repetition.

範例: I prefer communicating via social media rather than face-to-face because I am sensitive to noise. Using social media helps me focus better on conversations, especially when the environment is noisy.

建議: Answer is unclear and incomplete. Avoid hesitation and provide a clear, direct response with supporting details or examples.

範例: No, I usually don't argue with my friends because we respect each other's opinions. However, if disagreements happen, we try to resolve them calmly.

× It's yes, I live chatting with my friends.

✓ Yes, I love chatting with my friends.

The original sentence uses 'It's yes' which is incorrect. The correct response to the question is simply 'Yes'. Also, 'live' is a typo and should be 'love'.

× I'm very working during working.

✓ I work very hard during work.

The phrase 'I'm very working during working' is ungrammatical. 'Working' is a verb, not an adjective or adverb. The intended meaning is likely 'I work very hard during work'.

× I always have, uh, chat with my colleagues to unleash my feeling because I, I'm working under the high pressure, uh, environment.

✓ I always have chats with my colleagues to release my feelings because I work under a high-pressure environment.

'Have chat' should be 'have chats' or 'chat'. 'Unleash my feeling' is unnatural; 'release my feelings' is better. 'I'm working' should be 'I work' to indicate habitual action. 'The high pressure environment' needs an article and hyphen: 'a high-pressure environment'. Also, 'feeling' should be plural 'feelings'.

× And so I feel a bit stressed out to read my stress.

✓ And so I feel a bit stressed out and need to relieve my stress.

'To read my stress' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'to relieve my stress'. Also, 'feel a bit stressed out' is correct but needs a conjunction to connect the ideas properly.

× I always like trying to chat with my coworker.

✓ I always like trying to chat with my coworkers.

'Coworker' should be plural 'coworkers' if referring to multiple colleagues. Also, 'like trying to chat' is awkward; 'like chatting' or 'try to chat' would be better, but per instructions only correcting grammar problem types listed.

× I don't really touch out of, about the, uh, casual scenes of the people around me or the culture around me.

✓ I don't really talk about the casual scenes of the people around me or the culture around me.

'Touch out of' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'talk about'. The preposition 'about' is used with 'talk'.

× The last time I, when I chatted with my coworker at work was, uh, I told I was talking about the umm, boss of us and he is supportive and kind and so we always.

✓ The last time I chatted with my coworker at work, I was talking about our boss who is supportive and kind, and so we always...

The sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'I told I was talking' is incorrect; it should be 'I was talking'. 'Boss of us' should be 'our boss'. The sentence needs proper punctuation and structure.

× I prefer talking with only one friends because I don't want to.

✓ I prefer talking with only one friend because I don't want to.

'One friends' is incorrect; 'one' requires singular noun 'friend'. This is a singular and plural issue.

× I prefer social media of rather than face to face conversation because as I said, I am sensitive to noise, so talking with each person in the in the environment where it is noisy, I can focus on the conversation.

✓ I prefer social media rather than face-to-face conversation because, as I said, I am sensitive to noise, so talking with each person in an environment where it is noisy is difficult for me to focus on the conversation.

'Social media of rather than' is incorrect; it should be 'social media rather than'. 'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face'. The sentence is also missing clarity and proper prepositions. Added 'an' before 'environment'.

× No, Marina, I don't argue with my friends. Uh, but sometimes I find the umm, normally I don't.

✓ No, Marina, I don't argue with my friends. Normally, I don't, but sometimes I do.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Sometimes I find the umm, normally I don't' is ungrammatical and confusing. It should be restructured for clarity.