聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is good but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to make your sentences shorter and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I love chatting with my friends. However, I prefer texting because it is more convenient. For example, I can reply whenever I want, unlike real-time calls.

建議: Your answer is understandable but could be more specific and natural. Avoid saying 'boring' about your own conversation and try to use linking words to connect your ideas.

範例: I usually chat about our daily lives. For instance, I like to ask how their day went and how they are doing. Although it's mostly small talk, it helps us stay connected.

建議: Your answer is clear but a bit long. Try to use linking words and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, be careful with sentence structure and capitalization.

範例: I prefer chatting with one friend because group chats can be overwhelming. Since I am an introvert, one-on-one conversations are more comfortable for me.

建議: Your answer is good but incomplete at the end. Try to finish your sentences fully and use linking words to explain your reasons clearly.

範例: I definitely prefer communicating via social media because I am an introvert. Therefore, I feel less stressed and anxious compared to face-to-face communication.

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and informal. Try to organize your ideas better and avoid vague phrases like 'other than my friends like other people'. Use linking words to clarify your points.

範例: No, I usually don't argue with my friends. However, sometimes I argue with other people if they annoy me.

× Yes, I really love chatting with my friends but I personally prefer texting over talking on the phone or video calls because texting is more convenient in my opinion because I can reply whenever I want and unlike real time.

✓ Yes, I really love chatting with my friends, but I personally prefer texting over talking on the phone or video calls because texting is more convenient in my opinion since I can reply whenever I want, unlike real time.

The sentence uses 'because' twice in a way that makes it confusing and incorrect. Replacing the second 'because' with 'since' and adding commas improves clarity and sentence flow. In English, conjunctions should be used carefully to avoid redundancy and confusion.

× I usually chat about our daily day-to-day life. It's mostly small talk and boring but I like to know how their day was and how are they doing about their life and stuff.

✓ I usually chat about our daily day-to-day life. It's mostly small talk and boring, but I like to know how their day was and how they are doing with their life and stuff.

The sentence 'how are they doing about their life' is incorrectly structured as a question within a statement. Changing it to 'how they are doing with their life' corrects the sentence structure. Also, adding a comma before 'but' separates the clauses properly.

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because chatting in a group of people makes me feel really overwhelmed and stressful because I'm an introvert so I prefer one-on-one conversations rather than in Group chat.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because chatting in a group of people makes me feel really overwhelmed and stressed because I'm an introvert, so I prefer one-on-one conversations rather than in a group chat.

'Stressful' describes something that causes stress, but here the feeling is on the person, so 'stressed' is correct. Also, 'Group chat' should not be capitalized and needs an article 'a' before it. Adding commas improves readability.

× I definitely prefer to communicate via social media because I'm an introvert and I get stressed and anxious when I'm in front of people so it's much more convenient to.

✓ I definitely prefer to communicate via social media because I'm an introvert and I get stressed and anxious when I'm in front of people, so it's much more convenient.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'to' which is incomplete. Removing 'to' completes the sentence properly. Also, adding a comma before 'so' separates the clauses correctly.