聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，例如“Cherry”应为“chat”，且“knowledges”应为不可数名词“knowledge”。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复。

範例: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because they are very smart and I can learn a lot from them. Talking with them helps me gain useful knowledge that I remember well.

建議: 回答中表达不清且语句不完整，缺少连贯性。建议使用连词连接句子，明确表达聊天内容并补充具体细节。

範例: We usually chat about schoolwork and the games we play together, like Minecraft. For example, we discuss where to build our next house in the game and talk about our homework deadlines.

建議: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构不够流畅，且有重复。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并用连词使句子更连贯。

範例: As an introvert, I prefer chatting in a group because others can talk at the same time, so I can listen more. However, when I chat with only one friend, I have to keep the conversation going, which makes me feel shy.

建議: 回答中有语气词和重复，表达不够简洁。建议去除多余词汇，清晰表达原因，并使用连词连接句子。

範例: I prefer communicating via social media because I am quite shy. It allows me to share things I might be too scared to say face-to-face, where people can see my facial expressions.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地说明自己不常争吵的原因，并用连词使句子更流畅。

範例: I rarely argue with my friends because I am easy-going. When they try to argue, they usually apologize and we quickly make up.

× Yes, I do like Cherry with my friends as it provides me many useful knowledges as my friend is all quite smart, I mean smarter than me, so I will have talked to them.

✓ Yes, I do like chatting with my friends as it provides me with much useful knowledge since my friends are all quite smart, I mean smarter than me, so I will talk to them.

“knowledges”是不可数名词，不能用复数形式，应改为“knowledge”。“friend”应为复数“friends”，因为后文指的是多个朋友。动词时态和搭配也做了相应调整。

× They provide me some useful knowledge which I learned and kept in mind so it's very useful.

✓ They provide me with some useful knowledge which I have learned and kept in mind, so it's very useful.

“provide”后面通常搭配介词“with”，应为“provide me with”。“learned”应使用现在完成时“have learned”，表示过去发生并对现在有影响。

× I mean, we often chat about school work and maybe the games we all play together, the games that we all play together in it's called Minecraft envy discuss like where's the next place we're going to build our house in the game And we chat about homeworks like when when it's.

✓ I mean, we often chat about school work and maybe the games we all play together, like Minecraft. We discuss where the next place is to build our house in the game. And we chat about homework, like when it's due.

句子结构混乱，缺少连贯性和完整表达。将句子拆分并调整顺序，使表达更清晰。‘homeworks’应为不可数名词‘homework’。

× Well sometimes but my personality means that I argue with my friends. Like I barely argue with my friends as I'm really easy going and so every time my friends is trying to argue with me they'll just say sorry and go along with them and that's why.

✓ Well, sometimes, but my personality means that I rarely argue with my friends. Like, I barely argue with my friends as I'm really easy-going, and so every time my friends try to argue with me, they'll just say sorry and go along with me, and that's why.

“friends is”主谓不一致，应为“friends try”。“easy going”应连写为“easy-going”。“go along with them”应改为“go along with me”，因为主语是“my friends”。

× Yes, I do like Cherry with my friends as it provides me many useful knowledges as my friend is all quite smart, I mean smarter than me, so I will have talked to them.

✓ Yes, I do like chatting with my friends as it provides me with many useful knowledge since my friends are all quite smart, I mean smarter than me, so I will talk to them.

“like Cherry with my friends”中的“Cherry”应为“chatting”，且“provides me many”应为“provides me with many”，介词使用错误。