聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding filler words like 'uh' and redundant phrases. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and strengthens our connection. For example, we often share what happened during our week or day.

建議: Avoid filler words and improve coherence by using linking words. Be more specific and organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details.

範例: I usually chat with my friends about work and interesting stories or events I saw on TV or social media. Additionally, we share our personal experiences from the week.

建議: Improve sentence structure and clarity by avoiding repetition and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide a clear reason for your preference.

範例: I prefer chatting with a close friend because I trust her and we share many common ideas. Therefore, it's easier for me to connect and communicate openly.

建議: Avoid filler words and improve grammar. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and provide specific reasons for your preference.

範例: I usually prefer face-to-face communication because I can see body language, which makes the conversation feel more real. However, sometimes I use social media when my friends are far away.

建議: Work on grammar and sentence clarity. Use linking words to explain your ideas logically and avoid incomplete sentences. Be specific about how you handle disagreements.

範例: Generally, we don't argue because we share common ideas. However, when disagreements occur, we discuss them calmly and quickly reach an understanding.

× Yes, usually I like to chat with my friends and talk about what's happened for me in the week or day and uh, make me relax and have the best connection with them.

✓ Yes, usually I like to chat with my friends and talk about what has happened to me in the week or day and, uh, it makes me relax and have the best connection with them.

The phrase 'what's happened for me' is incorrect; the correct form is 'what has happened to me' because 'happen' is used with 'to' to indicate something occurring to someone. Also, 'make me relax' should be 'it makes me relax' to have a proper subject and verb agreement.

× I usually chat with my friends about work, about a story or uh, events I saw in the TV or social media.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about work, about a story or, uh, events I saw on TV or social media.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to TV or social media; the correct preposition is 'on' because we say 'on TV' and 'on social media'.

× I talk about my experience, uh, at the week and uh, speak about her, her experience.

✓ I talk about my experience, uh, during the week and, uh, speak about her experience.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect with 'week'; the correct preposition is 'during' to indicate a period of time. Also, 'her, her experience' is redundant; it should be 'her experience'.

× I almost prefer to chat with my close friend because I know her and I can trust her and have many common idea and know her so I it's easy for me to connected and trust her and say about.

✓ I almost always prefer to chat with my close friend because I know her and I can trust her and have many common ideas and know her, so it's easy for me to connect and trust her and talk about things.

'Many common idea' should be 'many common ideas' to match plural form. 'Connected' should be 'connect' to match the infinitive form after 'to'. The sentence also needed slight restructuring for clarity.

× Uh, I usually prefer to connect face to face because I can't see body language.

✓ Uh, I usually prefer to connect face to face because I can see body language.

The original sentence says 'I can't see body language' which contradicts the reason for preferring face-to-face communication. It should be 'I can see body language' to make logical sense.

× I can feel more real conversation but sometimes I can't have face to face conversation because my friends are are far away me.

✓ I can feel a more real conversation, but sometimes I can't have face-to-face conversation because my friends are far away from me.

'More real conversation' needs an article 'a' before it. 'Far away me' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'far away from me'.

× In use in general we don't have any argument because we have a more common ideas.

✓ In general, we don't have any arguments because we have more common ideas.

'A more common ideas' is incorrect because 'ideas' is plural and should not have 'a'. Also, 'argument' should be plural 'arguments' to match 'any'.

× But in some situation in sometimes we have different disagreements and talking about them, but not argument and quickly understanding or.

✓ But in some situations, sometimes we have different disagreements and talk about them, but not arguments, and quickly reach understanding.

'In some situation in sometimes' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'in some situations, sometimes'. 'Talking' should be 'talk' to maintain parallel structure. 'Not argument' should be 'not arguments'. The sentence was also rephrased for clarity.