聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and make your answer more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons. For example, mention what you enjoy about chatting and when you usually do it.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and share my thoughts. Whenever I have free time, I like to catch up with them and discuss our daily lives.

建議: Use correct grammar and linking words to make your answer coherent. Avoid repeating the same words and provide more specific details about the sports or topics you discuss.

範例: I usually chat with my friends about sports, especially cricket, since I enjoy playing and watching it. We often discuss recent matches and players' performances.

建議: Improve sentence structure and grammar. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly and avoid repetition. For example, explain why you prefer one-on-one conversations.

範例: I prefer chatting with one close friend because he understands me better and our conversations are more meaningful and comfortable.

建議: Make your answer more natural by correcting grammar and using linking words. Explain why face-to-face communication is special with specific reasons.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to see facial expressions and body language, which helps me understand the other person better.

建議: Avoid filler words and improve grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and explain why you argue and how it affects you. Also, choose appropriate vocabulary to express your feelings.

範例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends about political and religious topics. Although we have different opinions, these discussions help me understand their views better.

× I spend my quality time with my friends uh, when, whenever I got a free time

✓ I spend my quality time with my friends uh, when, whenever I get free time

The verb 'got' is past tense, but the sentence context requires present tense 'get' to match the habitual action described.

× So whenever we are chatting, we are discuss sports

✓ So whenever we are chatting, we discuss sports

The verb 'discuss' should be in the base form to agree with the plural subject 'we' in present tense; 'are discuss' is incorrect.

× I would love to prefer to chat with one friend which is close to me because he really understands the the way I speaking and what I'm speaking to and he understands my communication

✓ I would prefer to chat with one friend who is close to me because he really understands the way I speak and what I'm saying and he understands my communication

Use 'who' for people instead of 'which'; 'speaking' should be 'speak' and 'speaking to' should be 'saying' to correctly express the intended meaning.

× Sure, I would love to communicate with the face to face communication because face to face to communication are really special

✓ Sure, I would love to communicate face to face because face-to-face communication is really special

Remove unnecessary prepositions and articles; 'face to face' is an adverbial phrase and does not need 'with the'; also, 'communication' is singular, so use 'is' instead of 'are'.

× I really notice what I'm speaking to and he really understands me and what he is referring to

✓ I really notice what I'm saying and he really understands me and what he is referring to

Use 'saying' instead of 'speaking to' to correctly express the act of communicating words in this context.

× Usually I am arguing with my friends, uh, about uh, uh, about topics like uh, political topics, uh, are religious topics

✓ Usually I argue with my friends about topics like political topics or religious topics

Use simple present tense 'argue' for habitual actions; 'are' should be 'or' to correctly connect alternatives.

× So with these topics I usually arguing with them and it really amuses me

✓ So with these topics I usually argue with them and it really amuses me

Use simple present tense 'argue' for habitual actions; 'and' is correct here, but the verb form was incorrect.