聊天— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you like chatting with friends?
考生
I really enjoy chatting with friends and even on a day that I don't feel like it, it's bringing me joy and I can share a lot of stories and I just feel really comfortable around my friends.
考官
What do you usually chat about with friends?
考生
We usually have a deep conversation about love or even studying. We also give each other tips to help us survive the school year and about loving. We're just share the advice.
考官
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
考生
I think having a conversation with one people is more than enough. I just feel more comfortable talking with one. I just feel like I'm not fitting in a big amount of people.
考官
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
考生
I prefer communicating face to face because it would be more na natural and I just enjoy talking to them instead of calling because it shows more respect and that's all.
考官
Do you argue with friends?
考生
Of course, I think it's pretty normal in a friendship that sometimes we have a different mindset and everyone have their own opinion and we don't get along with each other sometimes. But that's not the biggest issue. And I usually argue with friends about really random topics that are pretty much hilarious.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you like chatting with friends?
分數: 75.0建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và thể hiện cảm xúc tốt, nhưng nên tránh lặp từ và câu quá dài. Bạn nên chia câu thành các câu ngắn hơn và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
範例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends. Even on days when I don't feel like talking, it still brings me joy. I can share many stories and feel very comfortable around them.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
分數: 65.0建議: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, tránh lỗi như 'We're just share'. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cụ thể hơn về chủ đề trò chuyện.
範例: We usually have deep conversations about topics like love and studying. Moreover, we share tips to help each other survive the school year. This way, we support one another effectively.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
分數: 60.0建議: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'one people' nên là 'one person'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy dùng từ nối để làm câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
範例: I prefer chatting with one person because I feel more comfortable. Talking in a big group makes me feel like I don't fit in.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
分數: 55.0建議: Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và chính tả, ví dụ 'na natural' nên là 'natural'. Câu trả lời hơi lủng củng và chưa rõ ràng. Hãy dùng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và giải thích lý do cụ thể hơn.
範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more natural. Also, talking in person shows more respect than just calling or chatting online.
Do you argue with friends?
分數: 70.0建議: Câu trả lời có nội dung tốt nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'everyone have' nên là 'everyone has'. Hãy dùng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.
範例: Of course, arguing with friends is normal because we have different mindsets. Everyone has their own opinion, so sometimes we don't get along. However, these arguments are usually about random and funny topics.
文法
× I really enjoy chatting with friends and even on a day that I don't feel like it, it's bringing me joy and I can share a lot of stories and I just feel really comfortable around my friends.
✓ I really enjoy chatting with friends and even on a day that I don't feel like it, it brings me joy and I can share a lot of stories and I just feel really comfortable around my friends.
The phrase 'it's bringing me joy' incorrectly uses the present participle form 'bringing' where the simple present 'brings' is appropriate to express a general truth or habitual action.
× We also give each other tips to help us survive the school year and about loving. We're just share the advice.
✓ We also give each other tips to help us survive the school year and about loving. We just share the advice.
The phrase 'We're just share the advice' incorrectly combines the auxiliary verb 'are' with the base verb 'share'. The correct form is 'We just share the advice' without 'are'.
× I think having a conversation with one people is more than enough.
✓ I think having a conversation with one person is more than enough.
The word 'people' is plural and cannot be used with 'one'. The singular form 'person' should be used to match 'one'.
× I just feel more comfortable talking with one.
✓ I just feel more comfortable talking with one person.
The pronoun 'one' is vague here; specifying 'one person' clarifies the meaning and is grammatically correct.
× I just feel like I'm not fitting in a big amount of people.
✓ I just feel like I'm not fitting in with a big number of people.
The phrase 'fitting in a big amount of people' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'in with' and 'number' is used for countable nouns like 'people' instead of 'amount'.
× I prefer communicating face to face because it would be more na natural and I just enjoy talking to them instead of calling because it shows more respect and that's all.
✓ I prefer communicating face to face because it is more natural and I just enjoy talking to them instead of calling because it shows more respect and that's all.
The phrase 'more na natural' contains a typo and should be 'more natural'. Also, 'would be' is changed to 'is' to express a general preference.
× Of course, I think it's pretty normal in a friendship that sometimes we have a different mindset and everyone have their own opinion and we don't get along with each other sometimes.
✓ Of course, I think it's pretty normal in a friendship that sometimes we have different mindsets and everyone has their own opinion and we don't get along with each other sometimes.
The subject 'everyone' is singular and requires the verb 'has' instead of 'have'. Also, 'a different mindset' should be plural 'different mindsets' to agree with 'sometimes we'.
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