聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は自然ですが、文法の誤りや冗長な表現が見られます。例えば、「most of times we are chatting also umm one eating dinner or lunch」は不明瞭で、より明確に表現する必要があります。文を簡潔にし、正しい文法を使う練習をしましょう。

範例: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because I don't enjoy being alone. Usually, we chat while having lunch or dinner together.

建議: 内容が曖昧で、話の具体性が不足しています。また、文法や語彙の誤りもあります。話題について具体的な例や理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。

範例: We usually talk about our daily activities. For example, yesterday I told my friends about my plans to study abroad next year.

建議: 回答は明確ですが、文法の誤りや表現の自然さに改善の余地があります。例えば、「on one by one」は不自然なので、「one-on-one」と言い換えましょう。接続詞を使って文を滑らかに繋げる練習も有効です。

範例: I prefer both situations. When I chat with a group, we discuss many topics, but in one-on-one conversations, I usually talk more seriously.

建議: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。特に「on we own by social media」は不自然です。理由を明確にし、簡潔で正しい文を作る練習をしましょう。

範例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because on social media, we can only see words, which makes it hard to understand emotions.

建議: 回答が不自然で文法的に誤りが多いです。「20 No」や「I don't often be make angry」は間違いです。簡潔で正しい文を使い、理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。

範例: No, I don't often argue with my friends because I prefer to enjoy our time together peacefully.

× Yes I do because I don't like spending time alone so I like spending time with my friends also most of times we are chatting also umm one eating dinner or lunch.

✓ Yes, I do because I don't like spending time alone, so I like spending time with my friends. Also, most of the time we chat while eating dinner or lunch.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'we are chatting' and 'one eating' which are awkward and grammatically incorrect. The verb 'chat' should be in simple present 'we chat' to express habitual action, and 'one eating' should be corrected to 'while eating' to indicate simultaneous actions. Also, 'most of times' should be 'most of the time' as a fixed expression.

× I usually talk the same, which is not special.

✓ I usually talk about the same things, which are not special.

The verb 'talk' needs an object, so 'talk about' is correct. Also, 'the same' should be 'the same things' to specify what is being talked about. 'Which is not special' should agree in number with 'things', so 'which are not special' is correct.

× For example, yesterday I did something also my friends, uh, well, it's going to uh, study abroad like that.

✓ For example, yesterday I did something, and my friends, well, are going to study abroad.

The sentence mixes past and future tenses incorrectly. 'Did something' is past tense, but 'it's going to study abroad' is incorrect; it should be 'are going to study abroad' to refer to friends' future plans. Also, 'also' is incorrectly used; 'and' is more appropriate to connect clauses.

× I prefer both situations.

✓ I prefer both situations.

This sentence is grammatically correct and does not require correction.

× For example, when I chat with groups we talk about a lot of things, but if I chat on one by one I always talk seriously.

✓ For example, when I chat with groups, we talk about a lot of things, but if I chat one-on-one, I always talk seriously.

The phrase 'chat on one by one' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'chat one-on-one' to mean individually. Also, commas are needed after introductory phrases for clarity.

× Actually, I like communicate face to face because, uh, on we own by social media, we can't see only words.

✓ Actually, I like to communicate face to face because, on social media, we can only see words.

The phrase 'like communicate' should be 'like to communicate'. 'On we own by social media' is incorrect; it should be 'on social media'. Also, 'we can't see only words' is awkward; 'we can only see words' is clearer.

× I think, uh, only words makes me difficult to understand.

✓ I think, only words make it difficult for me to understand.

'Only words' is plural, so the verb should be 'make' not 'makes'. Also, 'makes me difficult to understand' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'make it difficult for me to understand'.

× No, uh, I don't often be make angry with my friends at all because, uh, I'd like to enjoy chatting or do something with my friends.

✓ No, I don't often get angry with my friends at all because I'd like to enjoy chatting or doing something with my friends.

'Don't often be make angry' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'don't often get angry'. Also, 'do something' should be 'doing something' to maintain parallel structure with 'chatting'.