聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but contains some hesitations and minor grammatical errors. Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and use more natural expressions such as 'spend quality time' instead of 'have a wonderful and quality time'. Also, 'pick up their mind' is incorrect; you could say 'understand their thoughts' or 'get their opinion'.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it's interesting and allows me to spend quality time with them. Besides that, sometimes I try to understand their thoughts when they need advice.

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clear linking words. Try to organize your ideas logically and use connectors like 'for example', 'also', and 'after that' properly. Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Be more specific about the plan and activities.

範例: Mostly, we talk about our daily tasks and support each other in self-improvement. For example, we have a plan to read a book together and discuss it afterwards. Sometimes, we also watch movies and share our opinions about them.

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant but contains minor grammatical errors such as 'prefer talk' instead of 'prefer to talk'. Also, 'more quality time' should be 'higher quality time' or 'better quality time'. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: I would say I prefer to talk to one person because it is more convenient for me. As an introvert, I don't like being in large groups, and I believe we can have better quality time when we talk one-on-one.

建議: Your answer is understandable but has many hesitations and grammatical mistakes. Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Use linking words like 'however' and 'for example' correctly. Also, say 'it depends' instead of 'actually depends'.

範例: It depends. Sometimes, I prefer face-to-face communication, especially during English classes because I like to be in an environment where I can talk to people. However, other times I prefer communicating through social media, for example, when I want to chat with a friend quickly.

建議: Your answer has many hesitations and some incorrect word choices like 'confliction' instead of 'conflict'. Try to speak more fluently and use correct expressions such as 'come to an agreement' and 'lose my temper'. Also, avoid repeating 'uh' and organize your answer logically with linking words.

範例: I would say we have never had a serious conflict or argument. Sometimes, we have disagreements, but we talk and try to come to an agreement. However, there have been times when I lost my temper and said things I shouldn't, but I always apologize afterwards, and my friends do the same.

× Yes, I do, it is interesting and I can have a wonderful and, uh, quality time with them.

✓ Yes, I do, it is interesting and I can have a wonderful and, uh, quality time with them.

No correction needed for this sentence as it does not contain a verb + -ing form error.

× sometimes I pick up their mind on something, uh, when I need to give an advice.

✓ sometimes I pick up their minds on something, uh, when I need to give advice.

The phrase 'pick up their mind on something' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'pick up their minds on something' because 'mind' should be plural to match 'their'. Also, 'an advice' is incorrect because 'advice' is an uncountable noun and does not take an article. Use 'give advice' instead.

× Mostly we talk about our daily tasks and also we try to help each other on self improvement.

✓ Mostly we talk about our daily tasks and also we try to help each other with self-improvement.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect here. The correct preposition to use with 'help each other' is 'with'. Also, 'self improvement' should be hyphenated as 'self-improvement'.

× And it is we read a book and after that we talk about it.

✓ We read a book and after that we talk about it.

The phrase 'And it is we read a book' is awkward and incorrect. The sentence should start directly with the subject 'We' for clarity and correct sentence structure.

× We discuss over it.

✓ We discuss it.

The verb 'discuss' does not require the preposition 'over'. The correct form is simply 'We discuss it.'

× sometimes we watch a movie and talk about it after that and also.

✓ Sometimes we watch a movie and talk about it afterwards as well.

The original sentence ends awkwardly with 'and also.' It should be rephrased for clarity and proper sentence structure.

× I would say I prefer talk to one person.

✓ I would say I prefer to talk to one person.

After the verb 'prefer', the infinitive form 'to talk' should be used, not the bare verb 'talk'.

× I believe that we can have a more quality time if we spend our time only with talking to one person.

✓ I believe that we can have a higher quality time if we spend our time only talking to one person.

The phrase 'with talking to one person' is incorrect. It should be 'only talking to one person' without 'with'. Also, 'more quality time' is better expressed as 'higher quality time'.

× Actually depends.

✓ It actually depends.

The sentence lacks a subject. Adding 'It' makes the sentence complete and grammatically correct.

× Sometimes I prefer have face to face communication, especially in case of English classes, I prefer to be in environment and talk to people.

✓ Sometimes I prefer to have face-to-face communication, especially in the case of English classes; I prefer to be in the environment and talk to people.

After 'prefer', the infinitive form 'to have' is required. Also, 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face'. 'In case of' should be 'in the case of'. 'In environment' needs the definite article 'the'.

× but sometimes I prefer just uh, having communication through social media And uh, the time is uh, for example, when uh, I wanna talk to my friend.

✓ but sometimes I prefer just, uh, having communication through social media. For example, when I want to talk to my friend.

The sentence is run-on and lacks proper punctuation. Also, 'wanna' is informal and should be 'want to' in formal speech. The phrase 'the time is, for example' is awkward and should be rephrased.

× I would say, uh, we never had, uh, such a serious confliction and argument.

✓ I would say, uh, we have never had, uh, such a serious conflict and argument.

The present perfect tense 'have never had' is more appropriate here to indicate experience up to now. Also, 'confliction' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'conflict'.

× we try to, uh, come to agreement,

✓ we try to, uh, come to an agreement,

The phrase 'come to agreement' requires the indefinite article 'an' before 'agreement'.

× it happened that, uh, we couldn't control ourselves.

✓ it has happened that, uh, we couldn't control ourselves.

The present perfect 'has happened' is more appropriate to indicate an experience relevant to the present.

× I, for example, lose my mind and said something, talk down to them.

✓ I, for example, lost my mind and said something, talked down to them.

The verbs should be in the past tense to maintain consistency: 'lose' should be 'lost' and 'talk' should be 'talked'.

× And they said sorry to them after that.

✓ And they said sorry to me after that.

The pronoun 'them' is incorrect here because the subject is 'they' apologizing to the speaker. The correct pronoun is 'me'.