聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and fluent by avoiding repeated fillers like 'uh' and 'um'. Use correct verb forms and sentence structures, for example, say 'I like chatting with my friends because it is very important to me.' Also, keep your answer concise and clear within 5 sentences.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends. It helps me relax and share my thoughts. Whenever I have free time, I usually call or message them to talk about our day or interesting topics.

建議: Focus on using correct grammar and vocabulary. Avoid filler words and try to organize your answer logically using linking words like 'for example' or 'such as'. Be specific about the topics you discuss.

範例: Usually, I chat with my friends about various topics. For example, we often talk about shopping, fashion styles, and new food recipes. Sharing these interests makes our conversations enjoyable.

建議: Try to answer the question directly with a clear topic sentence. Use linking words to explain your preference and provide specific reasons. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases.

範例: I prefer chatting with a group of friends because it is more fun and we can share different ideas. When discussing important topics, having multiple opinions helps us make better decisions.

建議: Make your answer more fluent and natural by reducing fillers and completing your thoughts. Use linking words to compare both ways and explain your preference clearly.

範例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it feels more personal and confident. It is easier to express my opinions clearly. However, sometimes I use social media when meeting in person is not possible.

建議: Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid incomplete sentences. Use correct grammar and vocabulary to explain your opinion about arguments with friends.

範例: No, I usually don't argue with my friends because I respect their opinions. I believe everyone has different ideas, and I try to stay open-minded and understanding.

× I find trying chatting with my friends, it's uh, uh, very important thing to do.

✓ I find chatting with my friends is a very important thing to do.

The phrase 'trying chatting' is incorrect because 'trying' and 'chatting' are both gerunds here, but 'trying' is unnecessary and causes confusion. The correct form is to use 'chatting' alone as the gerund after 'find'. Also, the sentence structure is improved by connecting the two clauses properly.

× I'm going to chatting with my friend to have, uh, to discuss something about.

✓ I'm going to chat with my friend to discuss something.

After 'going to', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'going to chatting' is incorrect; it should be 'going to chat'. Also, 'to have, uh, to discuss something about' is awkward; 'to discuss something' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× usually I chatting with my friends about a lot of topics

✓ usually I chat with my friends about a lot of topics

The verb 'chatting' is incorrectly used here. After 'I', the base form or the correct tense of the verb should be used. Since this is a habitual action, the simple present 'chat' is appropriate.

× must comment topic we chatting about is a shopping

✓ the main topic we chat about is shopping

'Must comment topic' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'main topic'. Also, 'we chatting' should be 'we chat' for present simple tense. The article 'a' before 'shopping' is unnecessary because 'shopping' is an uncountable noun here.

× we're gonna to have fun with sharing

✓ we're going to have fun sharing

'Gonna' is informal for 'going to' and should not be followed by 'to'. Also, 'with sharing' is incorrect; 'have fun sharing' is the correct expression.

× It's fun to to discuss with a group of friends They make they make a lot of decision to to hear.

✓ It's fun to discuss with a group of friends because they make a lot of decisions to hear.

The sentence has repeated words ('to to', 'they make they make') and lacks proper conjunctions. Also, 'decision' should be plural 'decisions'. The corrected sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I prefer to meet friends and have a chatting face to face.

✓ I prefer to meet friends and have a chat face to face.

'Have a chatting' is incorrect because 'chatting' is a gerund and cannot be used as a noun here. The correct noun form is 'chat'.

× I find this uh, way more umm, funny and confident and uh, more easier to uh, to discuss my, to discuss my opinion.

✓ I find this way much more fun, confident, and easier to discuss my opinion.

'Funny' is incorrect in this context; 'fun' is the correct adjective. 'More easier' is redundant; 'easier' alone suffices. Also, 'confident' is an adjective describing a person, so it is better to say 'I feel more confident' or 'this way is more confident' is awkward; here, 'confident' is used incorrectly.

× No, usually I don't uh, argue with my friend or with anyone.

✓ No, usually I don't argue with my friends or with anyone.

'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the general meaning of arguing with any friend. This is a singular/plural issue.

× I believe there uh, everyone have, uh, a different idea, a different opinion and I still, uh, open minded.

✓ I believe everyone has a different idea, a different opinion, and I am still open-minded.

'There' is unnecessary here. 'Everyone have' is incorrect; 'everyone' is singular and requires 'has'. 'Open minded' should be hyphenated as 'open-minded' and used with 'am' to form the correct predicate.