聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có vẻ không tự nhiên và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp (ví dụ: 'read glass' không rõ nghĩa). Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, mạch lạc và cụ thể hơn về lý do bạn thích trò chuyện với bạn bè.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends every day because it helps me relax and stay positive. We often share stories about our daily lives and support each other.

建議: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh lặp lại thông tin đã nói trước đó. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, có cấu trúc tốt và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về chủ đề trò chuyện.

範例: Usually, I chat with my friends online about various topics such as shopping, recent news, or sometimes gossip about mutual friends.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp (ví dụ: 'have the rabbit' không rõ nghĩa). Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích rõ ràng hơn về sở thích của mình trong từng tình huống.

範例: I prefer chatting with a group when we work on assignments because it helps me share ideas. However, sometimes I like talking one-on-one for more personal conversations.

建議: Bạn trả lời khá tốt nhưng câu hơi dài và có lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ. Hãy sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và dùng liên từ phù hợp để câu mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy tránh lặp từ và bổ sung thêm lý do cụ thể.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it makes me feel more comfortable. Also, we can understand each other better and discuss topics more clearly.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích rõ hơn về lý do bạn hiếm khi tranh cãi với bạn bè.

範例: I rarely argue with my friends because I try to stay calm and avoid conflicts. I believe good communication helps prevent misunderstandings.

× I love chatting with my friends in everyday because it's helped me to read glass and give me a positive and, and strategy.

✓ I love chatting with my friends every day because it has helped me to relax and given me a positive mindset and strategy.

The phrase 'in everyday' is incorrect; it should be 'every day' as two words to indicate frequency. Also, 'read glass' seems to be a mishearing or typo; 'relax' fits better in context. The verb tense 'it's helped' should be 'it has helped' for clarity. The phrase 'and give me a positive and, and strategy' is incomplete and unclear; corrected to 'given me a positive mindset and strategy' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× And we can also sharing about, uh, the daily life.

✓ And we can also share about, uh, daily life.

After modal verb 'can', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'sharing' should be corrected to 'share'. Also, 'the daily life' is better as 'daily life' without 'the' in this context.

× As I say before, I I everyday chatting with my friends.

✓ As I said before, I chat with my friends every day.

The phrase 'As I say before' should be in past tense 'As I said before' because it refers to a previous statement. 'I I everyday chatting' is incorrect; it should be 'I chat every day' to use the simple present tense for habitual actions. Also, 'everyday' as one word is an adjective, but here 'every day' as two words is correct to indicate frequency.

× Uh but we just chatting in online and we have some topic like shopping or gossip about all the friends.

✓ Uh, but we just chat online and we have some topics like shopping or gossip about all the friends.

After 'we', the base form of the verb should be used for simple present tense habitual actions, so 'chatting' should be 'chat'. 'In online' is incorrect preposition usage; it should be 'online' without 'in'. 'Some topic' should be plural 'some topics' to match the plural sense.

× I really uh OP, open my mind to talk and chatting with a group, but sometimes like uh, have the rabbit.

✓ I really, uh, open my mind to talk and chat with a group, but sometimes, uh, I have the habit.

After 'to', the base form of the verb is used, so 'chatting' should be 'chat'. The phrase 'have the rabbit' is unclear and likely a mishearing; 'have the habit' fits better. Also, added missing subject 'I' before 'have the habit' for sentence completeness.

× I refer to communicate face to face because it makes me feel more comfortable and we can get to understand each other and we can sharing about the topic when we have communications more clearly and.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it makes me feel more comfortable and we can understand each other better, and we can share about the topic when we communicate more clearly.

'I refer to communicate' is incorrect; it should be 'I prefer to communicate'. 'Get to understand' is awkward; 'understand' is sufficient. 'We can sharing' should be 'we can share' after modal verb 'can'. 'When we have communications more clearly' is awkward; corrected to 'when we communicate more clearly'. Also, sentence was incomplete and needed restructuring for clarity.

× This situation is really rare between me and my friends because uh, I am not a person who like trauma, so Yep.

✓ This situation is really rare between me and my friends because, uh, I am not a person who likes drama, so yep.

'Who like trauma' is incorrect; the verb should agree with the singular subject 'who', so 'likes' is correct. Also, 'trauma' seems to be a mishearing; 'drama' fits better in context. 'Yep' is informal but acceptable in spoken language.