聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat natural but a bit long and unclear in places. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise, and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. Usually, I meet them at their place because it's comfortable to talk and eat there. We often chat for two to four hours, which I really enjoy.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to organize your ideas better, use linking words, and provide specific examples. Avoid vague phrases and incomplete sentences.

範例: My friends and I often talk about our childhood memories, such as games we used to play. Sometimes, we discuss current issues and how they affect our lives, which makes our conversations interesting.

建議: Your answer conveys your preference but has some grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to use correct sentence structures and linking words to explain your reasons clearly.

範例: I prefer chatting with one friend rather than a group because I feel nervous in groups. One-on-one conversations are more comfortable and allow for deeper communication.

建議: Your answer is generally clear but could be improved by avoiding informal language and completing your thoughts. Use linking words to contrast ideas and provide a complete explanation.

範例: It depends, but I prefer communicating via social media because it is more convenient and makes it easy to connect with people. However, face-to-face meetings require planning and travel, which can be less convenient.

建議: Your answer is honest but could be more organized and clear. Avoid informal phrases and explain your reasons with linking words to make your response coherent.

範例: No, I don't argue with my friends. Even if one of them tends to dominate the conversation and doesn't listen well, I prefer to avoid conflicts to maintain our relationship.

× Yes, I love chatting with my friends and usually I meet my friend at their spaces because it's more comfortable to talk and eat and we just chat for about two to four hours even it's really.

✓ Yes, I love chatting with my friends and usually I meet my friends at their spaces because it's more comfortable to talk and eat and we just chat for about two to four hours even though it's really.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'my friend' (singular) and 'their spaces' (plural). To maintain agreement, 'my friends' should be plural to match 'their spaces'. Also, 'even it's really' is incomplete and should be 'even though it's really' to be grammatically correct.

× With my friend we have a lot of comments including our childhood memories and so we usually talk about past events and what we did and what we play with.

✓ With my friends we have a lot of comments including our childhood memories and so we usually talk about past events and what we did and what we played with.

The phrase 'With my friend' should be plural 'With my friends' to match the context of shared memories. Also, 'what we play with' should be in past tense 'what we played with' to match the past events discussed.

× Or sometimes we talk about current issues in current status and how it is difficult in after which had it's.

✓ Or sometimes we talk about current issues and the current status and how it is difficult after which it has been.

The original sentence is unclear and contains tense errors. 'Had it's' is incorrect; it should be 'it has been' to correctly express ongoing difficulty. Also, 'in after which' is incorrect preposition usage and should be omitted or rephrased.

× I prefer chatting whether my friend rather than with a group of people because that makes me feel nervous.

✓ I prefer chatting with my friend rather than with a group of people because that makes me feel nervous.

The phrase 'whether my friend' is incorrect; it should be 'with my friend' to indicate the person preferred for chatting.

× So just one-on-one conversation is comfortable and then what group of people? It's hard to communicate each other very deeply, so I prefer just chatting with my friend.

✓ So just one-on-one conversation is comfortable and then with a group of people, it's hard to communicate with each other very deeply, so I prefer just chatting with my friend.

The phrase 'what group of people?' is unclear and should be 'with a group of people'. Also, 'communicate each other' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'communicate with each other'.

× I think it depends, but I think I prefer social media communication to face to face communication because social media is more convenient and easy to connect with people.

✓ I think it depends, but I prefer social media communication to face-to-face communication because social media is more convenient and easier to connect with people.

'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective. Also, 'easy to connect' should be 'easier to connect' to maintain comparative form.

× But if you wanna meet with the person face to face, we need to make an arrangement and then go there by.

✓ But if you want to meet the person face to face, we need to make an arrangement and then go there.

The phrase 'go there by' is incomplete and incorrect. Also, 'wanna' is informal and should be 'want to'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and proper structure.

× No, I don't argue with my friends even though she has problem in conversation.

✓ No, I don't argue with my friends even though one of them has a problem in conversation.

The pronoun 'she' is unclear when referring to 'my friends' (plural). It should be 'one of them' to specify a singular friend among multiple friends.

× I mean, she's talking herself, talk about herself only and she's not a good listener.

✓ I mean, she's talking to herself, talks about herself only, and she's not a good listener.

The phrase 'talking herself' is incorrect; it should be 'talking to herself'. Also, verb agreement is corrected to 'talks' to match the subject.