聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'news that have we uh we have watched' không chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially during extra classes or when we meet at school. We often discuss everyday dramas, news we've seen on TV or YouTube, and our favorite movies.

建議: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh lặp lại ý không cần thiết như 'chatting conversation are very fun and enjoyable'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý.

範例: I usually chat with my friends about various topics such as news from TV or YouTube, our favorite shows, and everyday dramas we hear at school.

建議: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'conservation' thay vì 'conversation', 'this girls' không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, đúng ngữ pháp và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I prefer chatting with a group of people rather than just one friend because group conversations are more lively and I can hear different opinions, which makes it more enjoyable.

建議: Câu trả lời chưa hoàn chỉnh và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'it's just limited about the topics'. Bạn nên hoàn thành câu trả lời, sử dụng cấu trúc rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ.

範例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face with my friends because it allows more natural and enjoyable conversations, unlike social media where topics can be limited and typing takes longer.

建議: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết.

範例: I don't usually argue with my friends, but sometimes we have disagreements about topics or feelings. Occasionally, we argue in class when the teacher asks us to explain our opinions.

× We usually chat in the school or everywhere else we meet together.

✓ We usually chat at school or everywhere else we meet together.

In English, we say 'at school' when referring to the location of school in general, not 'in the school'. 'In the school' is used when referring to inside the school building specifically.

× Especially on extra classes.

✓ Especially in extra classes.

The phrase 'extra classes' is plural, so it should be 'in extra classes' to indicate the location or time when chatting happens. Also, 'on' is incorrect preposition here; 'in' is appropriate for classes.

× news that have we uh we have watched in the TV's or in the YouTube.

✓ news that we have watched on TV or on YouTube.

The correct preposition for TV and YouTube is 'on', not 'in'. Also, 'TV's' is incorrect; it should be 'TV' without an apostrophe. 'The YouTube' is incorrect; just 'YouTube' is used.

× chatting conversation are very fun and enjoyable.

✓ chatting conversations are very fun and enjoyable.

The subject 'chatting conversation' is singular, but the verb 'are' is plural. To match the plural verb, the noun should be plural: 'conversations'.

× I usually chat with my friends many different topics like the news we have watched on TV or on YouTube, our favorites or everyday dramas that we have heard from the schools, Uh.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about many different topics like the news we have watched on TV or on YouTube, our favorites, or everyday dramas that we have heard from school.

The phrase 'many different topics' requires the preposition 'about'. Also, 'schools' should be singular 'school' when referring to the general institution.

× I prefer to chat with group of people to only one friends.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people rather than only one friend.

The phrase needs the article 'a' before 'group'. Also, 'friends' should be singular 'friend' to match 'only one'. The preposition 'to' should be 'rather than' for comparison.

× When I talk with only one person, the conservation sometimes being very bored or limited.

✓ When I talk with only one person, the conversation is sometimes very boring or limited.

The word 'conservation' is a typo; it should be 'conversation'. Also, 'being very bored' is incorrect; it should be 'is sometimes very boring' to describe the conversation.

× But however if I talk with a group of five or more than I can hear that many different views which make this girls more enjoyable and livable.

✓ But however, if I talk with a group of five or more, I can hear many different views which make this gathering more enjoyable and lively.

'More than' should be followed by a number or omitted. 'This girls' is incorrect; 'this' is singular and 'girls' is plural. 'Livable' is incorrect in this context; 'lively' is appropriate.

× I prefer to communicate face to face with my friends more than via social media because when we talk through the social media, it's just limited about the topics and we usually just think about what we talk and chatting by typing with a long time but face to face is really enjoyable and.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face with my friends more than via social media because when we talk through social media, the topics are limited and we usually just think about what we say and chat by typing for a long time, but face to face communication is really enjoyable.

The phrase 'through the social media' should be 'through social media' without 'the'. 'Limited about the topics' is incorrect; it should be 'the topics are limited'. 'Chatting by typing with a long time' is awkward; 'chat by typing for a long time' is correct.

× Well, I don't usually argue but with my friends, but sometimes if we have different views about what topping or sometimes we have different feelings about what, uh, people we usually argue with uh, bad, effective.

✓ Well, I don't usually argue with my friends, but sometimes if we have different views about topics or different feelings about people, we usually argue in a negative way.

The sentence has awkward phrasing and unclear words like 'topping' and 'bad, effective'. 'Argue with uh, bad, effective' is incorrect; it should be 'argue in a negative way' or similar.

× But sometimes in the classes we argue about the lessons because the teacher asked us to describe our.

✓ But sometimes in class, we argue about the lessons because the teacher asks us to describe our opinions.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object after 'describe our'. Also, 'classes' should be 'class' when referring to the general setting. 'Asked' should be 'asks' to match present tense context.