聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is quite long and a bit repetitive. Try to keep your response concise and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then add one or two supporting details.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and improves my mood. I usually talk to them when I am free or feeling low, and it always makes me feel better.

建議: Your answer is relevant but can be more specific and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give specific examples of topics you discuss. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'such as' to make your answer coherent.

範例: I usually chat with my friends about our assignments and daily life events. For example, we discuss our school work or share personal experiences in an informal way.

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct answer first, then support it with reasons. Use correct grammar and linking words like 'because' to explain your preference.

範例: I prefer chatting with a group of friends because we can share more ideas and have fun together. When we sit and chat, it makes me very happy and lifts my spirits.

建議: Your answer is good but can be clearer and more concise. Avoid unnecessary phrases and focus on the main reason. Use linking words like 'because' to connect your ideas logically.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can observe body language and facial expressions, which helps me understand the person better.

建議: Your answer has some unclear phrases and repetition. Try to use simple and clear language. Start with a direct answer, then explain with examples. Use linking words like 'but' to contrast ideas.

範例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, but only in a friendly way. We don't have serious arguments because we respect each other.

× I regular chat with them

✓ I regularly chat with them

The word 'regular' is an adjective, but here an adverb is needed to modify the verb 'chat'. The correct adverb form is 'regularly'. This is a common mistake where adjectives are used instead of adverbs.

× I chat mostly with them when I'm free and when I'm feeling very low because chatting with them makes me feel very good and uplift my mood

✓ I mostly chat with them when I'm free and when I'm feeling very low because chatting with them makes me feel very good and uplifts my mood

The adverb 'mostly' should come before the verb 'chat' for correct word order. Also, 'uplift' should be in third person singular form 'uplifts' to agree with the singular subject 'chatting with them'.

× after talking to them I feel very great and feel like I'm in a 7th heaven

✓ after talking to them I feel very great and feel like I'm in seventh heaven

The phrase '7th heaven' should be written as 'seventh heaven' in words for formal correctness. Also, 'a' before '7th heaven' is unnecessary because 'seventh heaven' is an idiomatic expression without an article.

× I usually chat with them about our assignments or anything which is going in my life or in his or her life, whoever I'm talking to

✓ I usually chat with them about our assignments or anything that is going on in my life or in his or her life, whoever I'm talking to

The phrase 'which is going' should be 'that is going on' to correctly express ongoing events. Also, 'going on' is the correct phrasal verb here.

× if we are talking, we are talking in an informal way and in our daily regular basis life conversation

✓ if we are talking, we are talking in an informal way and in our daily regular life conversations

The phrase 'daily regular basis life conversation' is awkward and incorrect. It should be 'daily regular life conversations' to correctly express habitual informal talks.

× it depends whether a person likes to speak with the group of a friend or with a single friends

✓ it depends whether a person likes to speak with a group of friends or with a single friend

'the group of a friend' is incorrect; it should be 'a group of friends' to indicate multiple friends. Also, 'single friends' should be 'single friend' to match singular.

× But me I personally like to chat with my full of friends

✓ But I personally like to chat with all my friends

The phrase 'my full of friends' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'all my friends' to indicate the entire group.

× We sitting together and we are chit chatting with them and we're happy and we are laughing very loudly

✓ We sit together and we are chit-chatting with them and we're happy and we are laughing very loudly

'We sitting' is incorrect; it should be 'We sit' for present simple tense. Also, 'chit chatting' should be hyphenated as 'chit-chatting'.

× because it makes me very good and makes me spirits very in a cloud

✓ because it makes me feel very good and lifts my spirits very high

The phrase 'makes me very good' is incorrect; it should be 'makes me feel very good'. Also, 'makes me spirits very in a cloud' is incorrect; the correct idiom is 'lifts my spirits very high'.

× because it's makes me feel like a what they are up to and what is their body language or what is their communication skills or and hence everything they have

✓ because it makes me feel what they are up to and what their body language is or what their communication skills are and hence everything they have

'it's makes' is incorrect; it should be 'it makes' (no contraction with 'makes'). Also, subject-verb agreement errors with 'body language is' and 'communication skills are' need correction.

× They can be seen in front face to face only

✓ They can only be seen face to face

The phrase 'in front face to face' is awkward and incorrect. The correct expression is 'face to face' without 'in front'.

× Yes I do argue with my friends but not in a very serious matter

✓ Yes, I do argue with my friends but not in a very serious manner

The phrase 'in a very serious matter' is incorrect; it should be 'in a very serious manner' to describe the way of arguing.

× I argue with them in a UN casual or in an unformed way like in a friendly manner

✓ I argue with them in an uncasual or informal way like in a friendly manner

'UN casual' is incorrect; the correct word is 'uncasual' or better 'informal'. Also, 'unformed' is incorrect; it should be 'informal'.

× But if you ask me that I argue with them in a serious manner, No I don't argue with them in a serious matter

✓ But if you ask me whether I argue with them in a serious manner, no, I don't argue with them in a serious manner

'if you ask me that' is incorrect; it should be 'if you ask me whether'. Also, 'serious matter' should be 'serious manner' to describe the way of arguing.