聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding repetition and improving sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and ensure clarity.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me understand them better and support them. I like to listen to their stories and learn more about their lives through our conversations.

建議: Be more specific and organise your answer using linking words to make it coherent. Avoid vague phrases like 'and everything' and try to use varied vocabulary.

範例: We usually chat about various topics such as personal matters, balancing life and work, job challenges, and studies. Sometimes, we also share some light gossip to keep the conversation lively.

建議: Improve sentence clarity and grammar. Use linking words like 'however' or 'but' to contrast ideas and make your answer more structured.

範例: It depends on the situation. If I want to discuss personal matters, I prefer chatting with one friend. However, for serious topics that require multiple opinions, I prefer group discussions.

建議: Avoid redundancy and improve sentence flow. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly and correct grammar mistakes.

範例: I prefer both face-to-face communication and social media, depending on the other person's preference. Either way, I enjoy staying connected with my friends.

建議: Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Use proper sentence structure and linking words to explain your point logically.

範例: I usually avoid arguing with my friends because I value our relationship. However, if they scold me unfairly, I can stand up for myself and engage in a calm discussion to resolve the issue.

× I would love to approach that to them more.

✓ I would love to approach them more.

The verb 'approach' is incorrectly followed by 'that to them'. The correct structure is 'approach them'. The phrase 'approach that to them' is ungrammatical and unnecessary here.

× I would love to know every details about them by chatting and I love to support them.

✓ I would love to know every detail about them by chatting and I love to support them.

The word 'details' is plural but preceded by 'every', which requires a singular noun 'detail'. Hence, 'every details' should be corrected to 'every detail'.

× I would chat about a little gossip and our personal issues, life balancing issues and job issues and studying issues and everything.

✓ I would chat about a little gossip and our personal issues, life balance issues, job issues, studying issues, and everything.

The phrase 'life balancing issues' is awkward; 'life balance issues' is more appropriate. Also, commas are needed to separate items in the list for clarity.

× Yeah, it based on the situation, if it's personal details it it I would love to chat with one friend, but if it's something serious with which we need to discuss with group of friends, then I prefer the group.

✓ Yeah, it is based on the situation. If it's personal details, I would love to chat with one friend, but if it's something serious that we need to discuss with a group of friends, then I prefer the group.

The original sentence has missing verb 'is' after 'it', repeated 'it', and awkward phrasing. Adding 'is' and breaking into two sentences improves clarity. Also, 'with which we need to discuss with group of friends' is incorrect; it should be 'that we need to discuss with a group of friends'.

× Yeah I can prefer both communication like face to face or via social media.

✓ Yeah, I can prefer both types of communication, like face-to-face or via social media.

The phrase 'prefer both communication' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer both types of communication'. Also, 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective.

× It's based on the others person preferences.

✓ It's based on the other person's preferences.

The phrase 'others person' is incorrect. The correct possessive form is 'other person's'.

× I would love to connect on any either way.

✓ I would love to connect either way.

The phrase 'any either way' is redundant. 'Either way' alone is sufficient and correct.

× Nope, I don't like to argue with my friends, but when it comes to their like, uh, something heated arguments, if they scold me, I don't take, I don't I can stand myself so that I can argue with my friends at that particular time.

✓ Nope, I don't like to argue with my friends, but when it comes to their heated arguments, if they scold me, I don't take it; I can stand up for myself so that I can argue with my friends at that particular time.

The phrase 'their like, uh, something heated arguments' is awkward; 'their heated arguments' is clearer. Also, 'I don't take' is incomplete; it should be 'I don't take it'. 'I can stand myself' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'I can stand up for myself'.