聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答が少し不自然で冗長な部分があります。例えば、「I prefer to chatting uh texting message like using lying」という表現は文法的に誤りがあり、意味も不明瞭です。より自然で効果的な表現を使い、文法ミスを避けることが重要です。

範例: I don't like chatting with my friends because it's hard for me to express my feelings clearly. Therefore, I prefer texting messages instead of talking.

建議: 回答が途中で終わっており、内容が不十分です。また、繰り返しや曖昧な表現（"umm", "because"の多用）を避け、具体的で明確な説明を心がけましょう。

範例: I usually chat about K-pop music because many of my friends enjoy it, and I like it too. We often discuss our favorite groups and songs.

建議: 文法的な誤りと不自然な表現が目立ちます。例えば、「come conveying emotions」や「it is easily to explain my」は正しくありません。より簡潔で正確な表現を使い、理由を明確に述べましょう。

範例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because it's easier to express my feelings clearly than in a group.

建議: 内容は理解できますが、「feelings or souls」などの表現は不自然です。また、接続詞の使い方を工夫して、より流暢で論理的な回答にしましょう。

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it's easier to understand emotions and feelings in person, whereas social media can be less clear.

建議: 「combine my thoughts or feelings」という表現は不自然で意味が伝わりにくいです。より適切な語彙を使い、理由を明確に述べることが大切です。

範例: I don't argue with my friends because I'm shy and find it hard to express my thoughts and feelings during disagreements.

× So I I prefer to chatting uh texting message like using lying.

✓ So I prefer chatting or texting messages like using LINE.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the gerund form of the verb without 'to' when expressing general preferences. Also, 'chatting' and 'texting' are gerunds here. Additionally, 'lying' seems to be a typo for 'LINE', a messaging app.

× I usually chat about umm K pop music with my friend because umm because my a lot of my friends like K pop and also I like so I.

✓ I usually chat about K-pop music with my friends because a lot of my friends like K-pop and I like it too.

The noun 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match 'a lot of my friends'. Also, the sentence was incomplete and needed to be finished properly for clarity.

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because it is difficult for me to come conveying emotions or feelings among or among a lot of members, so it is easily to explain my.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because it is difficult for me to convey emotions or feelings among a lot of people, so it is easier to explain myself.

The phrase 'come conveying' is incorrect; it should be 'convey'. The preposition 'among' is used correctly but repeated unnecessarily. 'Members' is vague; 'people' is clearer. 'Easily' should be 'easier' to compare difficulty. Also, 'explain my' is incomplete; it should be 'explain myself'.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because on via social media it is difficult for me to see emotions and the feelings or souls.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because via social media it is difficult for me to see emotions and feelings.

The phrase 'on via social media' is incorrect; 'via social media' is sufficient. 'The feelings or souls' is awkward; 'feelings' alone is appropriate.

× I don't argue with my friends because I'm a shy person so it is difficult for me to combine my thoughts or feelings so. Yeah.

✓ I don't argue with my friends because I'm a shy person, so it is difficult for me to express my thoughts or feelings.

The verb 'combine' is incorrect in this context; 'express' is appropriate when talking about sharing thoughts or feelings. The sentence was also fragmented and needed to be completed properly.