聊天— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you like chatting with friends?
考生
Absolutely, I love chatting with friends, especially in real life rather than texting, because when you text people you cannot really see their emotions. But when you are in real life you can change your whole mood, you can have fun, they can give you advices and new knowledge and that goes both ways.
考官
What do you usually chat about with friends?
考生
Well, we chat about lots and lots of things, but most of the time we talk about our studies and school and how we will study. And then at other times we talk about our futures and what we are planning to do in the futures and what we are planning to study. What are the next levels gonna be? And then we try to solve each other's problems and give each other advice.
考官
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
考生
I actually like to chat with only one friend because it gives you more space to share private stuff. And at the same time you can have that one person's full attention and so does they. And you can talk about so many topics rather than just talking about one topic where everybody wants to to participate.
考官
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
考生
As I mentioned before, I like to communicate with people face to face because you can read their body language, you can look in their eyes and you can know if they're telling the truth or not. You will feel them more and you will be able to be open more rather than just talking to a literal machine.
考官
Do you argue with friends?
考生
Well, everybody does argue with their friends and we argue sometimes over little stuff. But me as a person, I don't really like to argue with my friends nor with anybody in the world. And usually our problems happening is just like an impossible thing. And when there's a problem that's happening, we just like to talk it out.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you like chatting with friends?
分數: 85.0建議: Your answer is natural and clear, but try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. For example, instead of repeating 'when you are in real life', you can combine ideas more smoothly. Also, use 'advice' instead of 'advices' as it is uncountable. Try to keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.
範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends, especially face-to-face, because it allows me to see their emotions and share moods. This way, we can have fun and exchange advice and knowledge effectively.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
分數: 80.0建議: Your answer covers the topic well but is somewhat repetitive and informal. Try to avoid phrases like 'lots and lots' and 'gonna be'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be more specific about the topics. Also, avoid repeating 'futures' twice.
範例: We usually talk about our studies, such as our current courses and future plans. Additionally, we discuss our career goals and help each other solve problems by giving advice.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
分數: 75.0建議: Your answer is clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as 'so does they' and 'wants to to participate'. Try to use correct pronouns and avoid repetition. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.
範例: I prefer chatting with one friend because it allows for more private conversations and full attention from both sides. Moreover, we can discuss various topics instead of focusing on just one, which often happens in group chats.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
分數: 85.0建議: Your answer is natural and effective but could be more concise. Avoid repeating 'you can' multiple times and replace informal phrases like 'literal machine' with more appropriate expressions. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.
範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to read body language and eye contact, which helps me understand sincerity. Consequently, I feel more connected and open compared to communicating through social media.
Do you argue with friends?
分數: 70.0建議: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions, such as 'our problems happening is just like an impossible thing'. Try to use clearer and more formal language, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to improve flow.
範例: Although friends sometimes argue over minor issues, I personally dislike arguments. Usually, our problems are rare, and when they occur, we prefer to resolve them through calm discussions.
文法
× And at the same time you can have that one person's full attention and so does they.
✓ And at the same time you can have that one person's full attention and so do they.
The pronoun 'they' is used incorrectly with the auxiliary verb 'does'. Since 'they' is plural, the correct auxiliary verb is 'do'. The phrase should be 'so do they' to maintain subject-verb agreement.
× And usually our problems happening is just like an impossible thing.
✓ And usually our problems happening are just like an impossible thing.
The subject 'problems' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number. This corrects the singular and plural agreement issue.
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