图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cải thiện tính tự nhiên và rõ ràng: hãy trả lời trực tiếp, dùng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng và tối đa 2–3 câu bổ trợ. Sửa ngữ pháp (thì và cấu trúc), dùng từ phù hợp (e.g. "visit" thay vì "go to" nhiều lần) và tránh từ thừa. Cụ thể: nêu tần suất, mục đích và một chi tiết hỗ trợ ngắn gọn, sử dụng liên từ đơn giản nếu cần.

範例: Yes, I visit the library about once a week to study and borrow books. When I’m there, I usually search for reference materials for my classes or find a quiet spot to review notes.

建議: Rõ ràng hơn và chính xác về từ vựng: dùng danh từ đúng (e.g. "documentaries" → films or "books about documentaries" → "documentary books") và mở rộng thêm một chi tiết ngắn bằng liên từ. Tránh lỗi số ít/ nhiều và thêm lý do tại sao bạn thích những thể loại đó.

範例: I usually read comic books and books about science and nature because I enjoy the illustrations and learning new facts. For example, I often borrow nature documentaries in book form to learn about animals.

建議: Sắp xếp câu hợp lý và sửa ngữ pháp: trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích ngắn gọn. Tránh lặp từ và dùng thì quá khứ nhất quán. Nên dùng một liên từ để nối ý và một chi tiết giải thích cảm xúc hoặc thói quen.

範例: Yes, I went to the library with my younger sister when I was a child because our mother took us there regularly. However, I didn’t enjoy reading much back then; I preferred playing football with my friends.

建議: Trả lời cẩn thận khi bạn không chắc thông tin: bắt đầu bằng việc thừa nhận giới hạn thông tin, rồi đưa ý kiến cá nhân rõ ràng và ngắn gọn. Sửa cấu trúc câu, dùng từ chính xác (e.g. "many children"), tránh số liệu sai và kết thúc câu đầy đủ. Nên nêu lý do cho quan điểm nếu có.

範例: I’m not sure about Chinese children because I’m Vietnamese, but I think many children do visit libraries occasionally. In my opinion, visiting a library depends on the family and school culture, so it varies a lot.

× I often go to the library want to try the week.

✓ I often go to the library; I want to try it this week.

The original sentence lacks proper connectors and has missing words, causing unclear meaning. Use a semicolon or conjunction and include the pronoun 'it' and time expression 'this week' to clarify intent. Suggestion: separate ideas or use 'and'/'because' to join, and add missing objects.'

× When I go to the library I have tried to search.

✓ When I go to the library, I try to search for books.

Incorrect tense and missing preposition/object. 'Have tried' (present perfect) is inappropriate for habitual action; use simple present 'try'. Add 'for' and an object like 'books' to complete the verb 'search for'.

× I usually read comic books and documentary about science and nature.

✓ I usually read comic books and documentaries about science and nature.

Countable noun 'documentary' should be plural to match 'comic books' as a list of activities. Use plural 'documentaries'. Also consider adding 'watch' if intended, because 'documentary' usually pairs with 'watch'.

× Sure, I if I had to go to the library when I was a kid with my younger sister because my mom forced me to go to the library to reading a book to read a book.

✓ Sure, I had to go to the library when I was a kid with my younger sister because my mom forced me to read a book there.

Unnecessary conditional 'if' and redundant phrases. Use simple past 'had to' for past obligation. Replace 'to reading a book to read a book' with 'to read a book' and remove repetition. Ensure concise structure: subject + past verb + reason.'

× But my favorite? Not uh, read the book.

✓ But my favorite? Not really; I didn't like reading books that much.

Fragment and misuse of 'not uh'. Provide a complete clause. Use past tense 'didn't like' to match earlier past context and add adverb 'really' for natural speech. 'Reading' is correct verb form here.

× I like football more than read the book.

✓ I like football more than reading books.

After 'more than' when comparing preferences, use the gerund 'reading' not the base form 'read'. Also pluralize 'books' for general preference.

× I don't know about Chinese kids too much but not because I am Vietnamese but I think it's every children.

✓ I don't know much about Chinese kids because I am Vietnamese, but I think most children do go to the library.

Awkward phrasing and incorrect pronoun/quantifier 'every children'. Use 'most children' or 'every child'. Clarify cause 'because I am Vietnamese' and reorder for logical flow.'

× Around 1:00 will of will go to the library to read a book because it's not a good habit and.

✓ Around 1:00, many children will go to the library to read because it's a good habit.

Original is ungrammatical and contradictory ('not a good habit'). Fix verb order 'many children will go', remove 'of will', and correct the article use. Complete the sentence by stating positive idea 'a good habit'.