图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear and natural, but it is a bit redundant and slightly disjointed. Try to make your response more concise and coherent by linking your ideas smoothly and avoiding repetition. Also, aim to keep your answer within 4-5 sentences for better effectiveness.

範例: Not really. I prefer studying at home in my own room because it provides comfort and a peaceful environment where I can concentrate better than in the library.

建議: Your answer is relevant and informative, but the structure can be improved by using linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly. Also, avoid repeating words like 'lend' and 'library' unnecessarily. Try to be more concise and precise in your explanation.

範例: When I visit the library, I usually borrow books for my academic subjects because buying them is expensive. The library lends books for a set period, and I return them after my exams.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to organise your ideas clearly with correct grammar and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'I didn't have any' without specifying what you mean.

範例: Not really. I spent most of my childhood learning from my father, who taught me various subjects. Therefore, I didn't have much time to visit the library when I was young.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains an inappropriate placeholder (*******). Also, the grammar needs improvement, and the response could be more specific. Try to answer directly, clarify your point, and avoid vague or incomplete phrases.

範例: I'm not sure about Chinese children, but in Nepal, many students rely on their teachers and online resources rather than visiting the library frequently.

× I prefer reading and studying at my home in my own room because it gives me a sense of comfort and familiarity which I won't get in the library.

✓ I prefer reading and studying at home in my own room because it gives me a sense of comfort and familiarity which I won't get in the library.

The preposition 'at' is incorrectly used before 'my home'. In English, we usually say 'at home' without 'my' to indicate one's residence. Using 'at my home' is less common and sounds awkward here. Removing 'my' makes the sentence more natural.

× The times where I go to library, I usually take books for my academic subjects because books here are very expensive to buy.

✓ The times when I go to the library, I usually take books for my academic subjects because books here are very expensive to buy.

The phrase 'where I go to library' is incorrect. 'Where' is not appropriate for referring to time; 'when' should be used instead. Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener.

× The times where I go to library, I usually take books for my academic subjects because books here are very expensive to buy.

✓ The times when I go to the library, I usually take books for my academic subjects because books here are very expensive to buy.

The noun 'library' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific library. Omitting 'the' is incorrect here.

× So I usually lend it from the library.

✓ So I usually borrow them from the library.

The verb 'lend' means to give something temporarily, but the student is the one receiving books, so 'borrow' is the correct verb. Also, 'books' is plural, so 'them' should be used instead of 'it'.

× They lend it to us for a certain period of time and after we finish our examination, we have to return it back to them.

✓ They lend them to us for a certain period of time and after we finish our examination, we have to return them to them.

Again, 'it' should be 'them' to agree with the plural 'books'. Also, 'return it back' is redundant; 'return' already implies 'back', so 'back' should be omitted.

× Not really, my most of my time were spent with my father where he used to teach me about my subject and different variety of courses.

✓ Not really, most of my time was spent with my father where he used to teach me about my subjects and different varieties of courses.

'Most of my time' is singular and requires the singular verb 'was' instead of 'were'. Also, 'my subject' should be plural 'my subjects' to match 'different variety of courses'. 'Variety' should be pluralized to 'varieties' when referring to multiple types.

× So I didn't have much time to go to library and since I was admitted very young I didn't have any.

✓ So I didn't have much time to go to the library and since I was admitted very young I didn't have any.

Again, 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. 'Go to library' is incorrect; it should be 'go to the library'.

× Well, I don't have idea about that because I'm Nepalese and ******* people don't usually go to the library because most of the information are given to them by their teachers and they are mostly dependent on the Internet sources and the material that their teachers provide.

✓ Well, I don't have an idea about that because I'm Nepalese and Nepalese people don't usually go to the library because most of the information is given to them by their teachers and they are mostly dependent on the Internet sources and the material that their teachers provide.

The phrase 'I don't have idea' is missing the article 'an' before 'idea'. The placeholder '*******' should be replaced with 'Nepalese' to match the nationality mentioned. Also, 'information' is an uncountable noun and takes singular verb 'is' instead of 'are'.