图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use complete sentences and correct prepositions. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas more smoothly. For example, say "No, I don't often go to the library because it is far from my home. Instead, I prefer to listen to audio materials, study, and read books at home."

範例: No, I don't often go to the library because it is far from my home. Instead, I prefer to listen to audio materials, study, and read books at home.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using better sentence structure and linking words. Avoid starting with 'And' and try to connect your ideas clearly. For example, "I usually study my lessons and do homework there. Additionally, I try to read new books to expand my knowledge."

範例: I usually study my lessons and do homework there. Additionally, I try to read new books to expand my knowledge.

建議: Your answer has several grammatical mistakes and unclear phrasing. Use past tense correctly and structure your sentences clearly. For example, "Yes, when I was a kid, my mom took me to the library because it was a new place for me. She showed me new books, and I tried to read them."

範例: Yes, when I was a kid, my mom took me to the library because it was a new place for me. She showed me new books, and I tried to read them.

建議: Your answer is somewhat contradictory and contains grammatical errors. Be clear and consistent in your opinion. For example, "Actually, Chinese kids do not often go to the library. However, since Chinese people are hardworking, they usually study hard and sometimes visit the library to learn new things."

範例: Actually, Chinese kids do not often go to the library. However, since Chinese people are hardworking, they usually study hard and sometimes visit the library to learn new things.

× No, because library is a far off my home place and actually I listen and study and read a book in my home.

✓ No, because the library is far from my home and actually I listen, study, and read books at home.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place. Also, 'far off my home place' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'far from my home'. Additionally, 'read a book in my home' is better expressed as 'read books at home' for naturalness and plural consistency.

× And I usually study lesson and do my homework and I try reading new books.

✓ I usually study lessons, do my homework, and try to read new books.

The phrase 'try reading' is less appropriate here; 'try to read' is the correct form to express attempting an action. Also, 'study lesson' should be pluralized to 'study lessons' for correctness.

× The yes actually my mom and me to the library because it's a new place and she show she shows me a new books and I try read it.

✓ Yes, actually my mom and I went to the library because it was a new place, and she showed me new books and I tried to read them.

The sentence has multiple past tense errors: 'me' should be 'I' as the subject, 'went' is the past tense of 'go', 'it's' should be 'it was' for past tense, 'show' should be 'showed', 'a new books' should be 'new books' (plural without 'a'), and 'try read' should be 'tried to read'. Also, 'them' is used to refer to 'books' correctly.

× Actually no, but I think Chinese people are so hardworking and he and they try to learn everything very well and I think they are usually go to the library for learning new thing.

✓ Actually no, but I think Chinese people are very hardworking and they try to learn everything very well, and I think they usually go to the library to learn new things.

The pronoun 'he' is incorrectly used and should be removed. 'They are usually go' is incorrect; it should be 'they usually go'. Also, 'new thing' should be pluralized to 'new things'. The phrase 'for learning' is better expressed as 'to learn'.