图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but could be more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy such as "try to visit" and "try as much as I can". Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: I don't go to the library as often as I'd like because of family responsibilities. However, I visit whenever I have free time to pick up books, since reading is one of my favourite hobbies.

建議: Your answer has good content but some sentences are a bit unclear and repetitive. Try to use linking words like 'mainly' or 'also' and avoid filler words like 'it's it's'. Make your sentences more fluent and natural.

範例: When I go to the library, I usually enjoy some 'me time'. I mainly read research articles about dentistry, which relates to my background and helps me improve my skills. I also enjoy reading love stories and novels because they are very enjoyable.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy, such as 'to to'. Try to use clearer sentence structures and linking words like 'and' or 'also' to improve coherence.

範例: Yes, I used to go to the library at least twice a week when I was a child. My dad would take us there to spend quality family time, and it was one of my favourite places to discover new books.

建議: Your answer repeats the same idea and lacks variety in vocabulary. Try to avoid repetition and use linking words like 'because' or 'since' to explain your opinion more clearly and naturally.

範例: I think Chinese children often visit libraries because education is highly valued in China. Since they focus on building a strong future, going to the library is a common habit among kids.

× Not that often I would like due to family responsibilities, but I try to visit when I have free time and as well to pick up books and to read at home.

✓ Not that often as I would like due to family responsibilities, but I try to visit when I have free time and also to pick up books and read at home.

The phrase 'I would like' requires the preposition 'as' to form the correct expression 'as I would like'. Also, 'and as well' is redundant; 'also' or 'and' alone is sufficient. Additionally, 'to read' after 'and' is unnecessary; 'read' is correct here.

× When I go to library, usually I feel like it's me time.

✓ When I go to the library, usually I feel like it's me time.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener.

× I read mostly research about dentistry as this relates with my background and helps me to develop my skills.

✓ I mostly read research about dentistry as this relates to my background and helps me to develop my skills.

The verb 'relate' is followed by the preposition 'to', not 'with'. Also, 'mostly' is better placed before the verb 'read' for natural word order.

× But as well, sometimes I read love stories, novels, it's it's such an enjoyable.

✓ But also, sometimes I read love stories and novels; it's such an enjoyable experience.

The phrase 'it's it's' is a repetition error. Also, 'such an enjoyable' is incomplete; it needs a noun like 'experience' to be grammatically correct.

× Yes, we used to go very often to library at least twice per week.

✓ Yes, we used to go to the library very often, at least twice per week.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the'. Also, the adverb 'very often' is better placed after the verb phrase for natural flow.

× My dad used to take us there and spend quality time with family and as well used to be one of my favorite places to go and to to see what new books they have arrived.

✓ My dad used to take us there and spend quality time with family, and it also used to be one of my favorite places to go and see what new books had arrived.

The phrase 'and as well used to be' is incorrect; 'and it also used to be' is correct. The phrase 'to to see' is a repetition error. 'Have arrived' should be in past perfect 'had arrived' to indicate the books arrived before the visit.

× I believe that Chinese kids go very often to library, as in China they are focused mostly in education, developing the future.

✓ I believe that Chinese kids go to the library very often, as in China they are mostly focused on education and developing the future.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the'. The phrase 'focused mostly in' should be 'mostly focused on' for correct preposition use.

× And yes, I think kids in China visit library very often.

✓ And yes, I think kids in China visit the library very often.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place.