图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan buat kalimat lebih alami serta efektif. Gunakan kalimat langsung dan hindari pengulangan kata seperti 'library'.

範例: No, I don't often go to the library because it is quite far from my home, so I find it difficult to visit regularly.

建議: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kosakata yang tepat. Jelaskan dengan kalimat yang lebih jelas dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren.

範例: When I am in the library, I usually look for books with magical or horror stories because I really enjoy those genres.

建議: Perbaiki tata bahasa, terutama penggunaan tense dan subjek. Buat kalimat lebih alami dan singkat tanpa pengulangan.

範例: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I was too lazy to read books.

建議: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan struktur kalimat. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami dan hindari pengulangan. Jelaskan dengan contoh yang lebih spesifik dan relevan.

範例: Yes, Chinese kids often visit the library. I have seen many of them sharing their study experiences on social media, which shows they are very dedicated to learning.

× No I'm not because the library in my country is so far from my home so that why I can't always go to the library.

✓ No, I don't because the library in my country is so far from my home, so that's why I can't always go to the library.

The phrase 'No I'm not' is incorrect in response to the question 'Do you often go to the library?'. The correct negative response is 'No, I don't'. Also, 'so that why' should be 'so that's why' to be grammatically correct.

× Well if I'm in the library of course I will searching for a book that have magical story or maybe Horror Story because I love a male story so much and horror.

✓ Well, if I'm in the library, of course I will search for a book that has a magical story or maybe a horror story because I love magical stories and horror.

After 'will', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'will searching' should be 'will search'. Also, 'have' should be 'has' to agree with the singular noun 'book'. 'A male story' seems to be a typo and should be 'magical story'. Articles 'a' should be used before 'horror story'.

× No, I didn't because when I were a kid I never go to a library because I'm so lazy to read a book.

✓ No, I didn't because when I was a kid I never went to a library because I was so lazy to read a book.

The past tense of 'be' for singular first person is 'was', not 'were'. Also, 'go' should be in past tense 'went' to match the past time frame. 'I'm' should be 'I was' to maintain past tense consistency.

× Yes, a day too. Chinese kids often go to the library. I saw so many Chinese kids often go to the library from Media Social and they are always so smart.

✓ Yes, every day too. Chinese kids often go to the library. I saw so many Chinese kids often going to the library from social media and they are always so smart.

'A day too' is incorrect; 'every day too' is appropriate. 'Media Social' should be 'social media'. 'Often go' after 'I saw' should be 'often going' to correctly describe the observed action.