图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you could improve it by adding a linking word to connect your ideas more smoothly and by providing a bit more detail about why the library helps you concentrate.

範例: Yes, I often go to the library because I find it easier to concentrate there. For instance, unlike at home where distractions like noise or chores interrupt me, the quiet environment in the library helps me focus better.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains awkward phrasing. Try to clarify your meaning and use linking words to explain why you practice coding and English. Also, avoid vague expressions like 'after creating my job'.

範例: I usually practice coding and study English in the library because I want to improve my skills for future job opportunities. This helps me prepare better for my career development.

建議: Your answer is confusing and contradictory. You say you went to the library, but then mention your parents were worried about germs there, which suggests you might not have gone. Try to clarify your answer and provide specific details with linking words.

範例: Actually, I didn't go to the library much when I was a child because my parents were worried about germs and viruses there. Therefore, I usually stayed at home instead.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using linking words and providing more specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

範例: In my opinion, Chinese kids don't often go to the library because they prefer playing video games at home. For example, many children find video games more entertaining and accessible than visiting the library.

× I often practice coding and English in the library because after creating my job, I need to prepare for my next career opportunity.

✓ I often practice coding and English in the library because after creating my job, I needed to prepare for my next career opportunity.

The phrase 'after creating my job' is unclear and likely intended to refer to a past event. Using 'needed' aligns the tense correctly with the past action implied. The original sentence mixes present tense 'need' with a past event, causing a tense inconsistency.