图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'so' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, and keep it concise within 5 sentences. For example, start with 'Yes, I often go to the university library because it has a large collection of books. I usually visit during my free time to study or read.'

範例: Yes, I often go to the university library because it has a large collection of books. I usually visit during my free time to study or read. The library is a quiet place that helps me focus on my studies.

建議: Complete your sentences fully and avoid repetition like 'in my in my'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, say 'I usually read books related to my academic studies because I am learning foreign languages at university. Therefore, I focus on language learning materials.'

範例: I usually read books related to my academic studies because I am learning foreign languages at university. Therefore, I focus on language learning materials that help me improve my skills.

建議: Avoid filler words like 'umm' and 'uh' and use past tense consistently. Also, add linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, 'Yes, when I was a child, there was a public library in my hometown. I often went there with my friends and used to read various books.'

範例: Yes, when I was a child, there was a public library in my hometown. I often went there with my friends and used to read various books that interested me.

建議: Avoid excessive filler words and incomplete sentences. If you don't know the answer, say so clearly and briefly. For example, 'I am not sure about Chinese children, but I think many of them might visit libraries to study or read.'

範例: I am not sure about Chinese children, but I think many of them might visit libraries to study or read, as libraries are common places for learning.

× when I'm in university, I go to library, uh, in our university have a large uh library and there are so many thousand books

✓ when I'm in university, I go to the library, uh, our university has a large uh library and there are so many thousands of books

The sentence lacks the definite article 'the' before 'library' which is necessary when referring to a specific place. Also, 'in our university have a large library' is incorrect because 'university' is singular and requires 'has' instead of 'have'. Additionally, 'so many thousand books' should be 'so many thousands of books' to correctly express quantity.

× so, uh, when I'm in free time, I go to the library with my.

✓ so, uh, when I have free time, I go to the library by myself.

The phrase 'when I'm in free time' is incorrect; it should be 'when I have free time'. Also, 'I go to the library with my' is incomplete and unclear. It should be 'I go to the library by myself' or specify with whom if intended.

× When I go to library, I read some books which are relevant to my academic.

✓ When I go to the library, I read some books which are relevant to my academic studies.

The phrase 'go to library' is missing the definite article 'the'. Also, 'my academic' is incomplete; it should be 'my academic studies' or 'my academics' to be grammatically correct.

× I learn about foreign languages in my in my university.

✓ I learn foreign languages at my university.

The phrase 'in my in my university' is repetitive and incorrect. The correct preposition for institutions like universities is 'at'. Also, 'learn about foreign languages' can be simplified to 'learn foreign languages'.

× So I always try to read some books which.

✓ So I always try to read some books which are related to my studies.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb or clause after 'which'. It needs to be completed to make sense.

× I remember when I was child, there was a library in my hometown.

✓ I remember when I was a child, there was a library in my hometown.

The phrase 'I was child' is missing the article 'a' before 'child'.

× It is a Public Library.

✓ It is a public library.

'Public' should not be capitalized unless it is part of a proper noun.

× I went there with my friends and also at that time I, uh, used to read some books.

✓ I went there with my friends and also, at that time, I used to read some books.

The sentence is mostly correct but needs commas for clarity and flow.

× Uh, actually I have not a proper idea about it because I'm not from China.

✓ Uh, actually I do not have a proper idea about it because I'm not from China.

The phrase 'I have not a proper idea' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I do not have a proper idea'.

× So, uh, but uh, I guess that, uh, China is a travel country.

✓ So, uh, I guess that China is a travel destination.

The phrase 'China is a travel country' is awkward and incorrect. 'Travel destination' is more appropriate. Also, 'So, uh, but uh,' is redundant; 'but' after 'so' is unnecessary.

× Uh, so I think that, uh, the children of, uh, student or children of China.

✓ Uh, so I think that the children or students of China often go to the library.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. It needs to be completed to convey a clear meaning.