图书馆— Part 1 評分報告
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Part 1
考官
Do you often go to the library?
考生
All the burning pain listening to you talk about your new soul mate, she's so perfect, blah blah blah. How I wish you wake up one day, come to me, confess your love. At least just let me say that when I talk to you.
考官
What do you usually do in the library?
考生
Don't you notice how I get quiet when there's no one else around me and you? An awkward silence. Don't you dare look at me that way. I don't need reminders of how you don't feel the same that when I talk to you.
考官
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
考生
I'm in a reckless fever, love struggle. I tease. I thought I'd never be. Quite a job you've done on me, Sir. You've been hosting parties in my mind. I'm working overtime to have you in my world. Oh, what a curse it is to be a lover girl.
考官
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
考生
Excuse me, I have issues with your question. See, this is a very stereotypical depiction of Chinese children. It does only harm to them. You should not assume that Chinese kids go to the library. They could be at the basketball basketball courts, playing games with their friends, not just studying. There's a stereotype. Do better, young man.
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Part 1
Do you often go to the library?
分數: 10.0建議: Câu trả lời của bạn không liên quan đến câu hỏi và không sử dụng tiếng Anh một cách tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và cung cấp chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể, tránh lan man hoặc lạc đề.
範例: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy reading books and studying in a quiet environment. It helps me concentrate better and find useful resources for my assignments.
What do you usually do in the library?
分數: 10.0建議: Câu trả lời không trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và thiếu nội dung liên quan. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng về các hoạt động bạn thường làm trong thư viện, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu nối để làm cho câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
範例: Usually, I read books or study quietly in the library. Sometimes, I also use the computers there to do research for my school projects.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
分數: 10.0建議: Câu trả lời không liên quan đến câu hỏi và không có cấu trúc rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, nêu rõ việc bạn có thường đến thư viện khi còn nhỏ hay không, kèm theo lý do hoặc trải nghiệm cụ thể.
範例: Yes, I used to go to the library often when I was a kid. I enjoyed reading storybooks and it was a quiet place where I could focus on my studies.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
分數: 20.0建議: Câu trả lời có ý kiến cá nhân nhưng thiếu sự trả lời trực tiếp và chi tiết về câu hỏi. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, cung cấp thông tin cụ thể và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để làm rõ quan điểm của mình một cách lịch sự và hiệu quả.
範例: In my opinion, Chinese kids have diverse interests. While some often go to the library to study, others prefer outdoor activities like playing basketball or spending time with friends.
文法
× How I wish you wake up one day, come to me, confess your love.
✓ How I wish you would wake up one day, come to me, confess your love.
The sentence expresses a wish about a future event, so the correct form is 'would wake up' to indicate a hypothetical or desired action in the future, not the simple present 'wake up'.
× Don't you notice how I get quiet when there's no one else around me and you?
✓ Don't you notice how I get quiet when there's no one else around me and you?
This sentence is grammatically correct as it uses the present tense appropriately to describe a habitual action.
× I don't need reminders of how you don't feel the same that when I talk to you.
✓ I don't need reminders of how you don't feel the same when I talk to you.
The phrase 'that when' is incorrect; 'that' should be removed to maintain correct sentence structure and meaning.
× I thought I'd never be.
✓ I thought I'd never be.
This sentence is grammatically correct; 'thought' is past tense and 'I'd' (I would) is appropriate here.
× You should not assume that Chinese kids go to the library.
✓ You should not assume that Chinese kids go to the library.
This sentence is correct; 'should not assume' is a modal verb usage and 'go' is present tense appropriate for general truths.
× They could be at the basketball basketball courts, playing games with their friends, not just studying.
✓ They could be at the basketball courts, playing games with their friends, not just studying.
The repetition of 'basketball' is an error; it should be mentioned only once to correctly refer to the plural noun 'courts'.
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