图书馆— Part 1 評分報告
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Part 1
考官
Do you often go to the library?
考生
All the burning pain listening to you talk about your new soul mate, she's so perfect, blah blah blah. How I wish you wake up one day, come to me, confess your love. At least just let me say that when I talk to you.
考官
What do you usually do in the library?
考生
Don't you notice how I get quiet when there's no one else around me and you? An awkward silence. Don't you dare look at me that way. I don't need reminders of how you don't feel the same that when I talk to you.
考官
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
考生
I'm in a reckless fever, love struggle. I tease. I thought I'd never be. Quite a job you've done on me, Sir. You've been hosting parties in my mind. I'm working overtime to have you in my world. Oh, what a curse it is to be a lover girl.
考官
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
考生
Excuse me, I have issues with your question. See, this is a very stereotypical depiction of Chinese children. It does only harm to them. You should not assume that Chinese kids go to the library. They could be at the basketball basketball courts, playing games with their friends, not just studying. There's a stereotype. Do better, young man.
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× How I wish you wake up one day, come to me, confess your love.
✓ How I wish you would wake up one day, come to me, confess your love.
The sentence expresses a wish about a future event, so the verb 'wake' should be in the subjunctive mood or use 'would' to indicate a hypothetical situation. Using 'would wake' is correct here.
× Don't you notice how I get quiet when there's no one else around me and you?
✓ Don't you notice how I get quiet when there's no one else around me and you?
This sentence is grammatically correct and fits the present tense context, so no correction is needed.
× I don't need reminders of how you don't feel the same that when I talk to you.
✓ I don't need reminders of how you don't feel the same when I talk to you.
The word 'that' is unnecessary and incorrect in this context; removing it improves sentence clarity and correctness.
× I thought I'd never be.
✓ I thought I'd never be.
This sentence is grammatically correct in past tense and does not require correction.
× You should not assume that Chinese kids go to the library.
✓ You should not assume that Chinese kids go to the library.
This sentence is grammatically correct and fits the present tense context, so no correction is needed.
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