图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，且有些冗余。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，同时注意冠词的使用，如“the library”。

範例: I used to go to the library when I was in school for self-study, but now I usually study at home, so I don't go there often.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且有重复和不连贯的部分。建议使用更准确的时态和词汇，避免口语化的停顿，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: When I was in school, if I had busy assignments, I would do my homework and meet the deadlines. After finishing them, I liked to read books about history or design, which are my interests.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和重复表达，句子结构不够清晰。建议简化句子，避免重复，使用正确的时态和代词。

範例: Yes, when I was in primary school in Singapore, our teachers took the whole class to the library once or twice a week. They gave us book borrowing tickets so we could borrow books.

建議: 回答内容混乱且表达不清，存在重复和语法错误。建议理清思路，避免无关信息，使用连贯的句子表达观点。

範例: I think many Chinese kids often go to public libraries. For example, last weekend I visited the provincial library and saw many high school and college students studying there rather than just reading books.

× Well I used to go to library when I was in school.

✓ Well, I used to go to the library when I was in school.

这里缺少了定冠词“the”，因为“library”是特指的图书馆。根据语法问题类型22，文章错误。

× I did self studies in there, but now I study at home so I don't often go to the library.

✓ I did self-studies there, but now I study at home so I don't often go to the library.

“in there”用法不当，应该直接用“there”表示“在那里”。

× if I have busy assignments, I will do homeworks and finish the DDL.

✓ if I have busy assignments, I will do homework and finish the DDL.

“homework”是不可数名词，不用复数形式。

× if I completed all the DDLS under the assignments or the tasks, I will read books based on my interests such as history or books about design.

✓ if I completed all the DDLs under the assignments or the tasks, I will read books based on my interests such as history or books about design.

“DDL”作为缩写，如果表示多个截止日期，应加复数形式“DDLs”。

× Yes, when I was in primary school in an International School in Singapore, our teachers will take the entire class to the library like or maybe Wednesdays or Fridays.

✓ Yes, when I was in primary school in an International School in Singapore, our teachers would take the entire class to the library, maybe on Wednesdays or Fridays.

“will”用于过去时态不合适，应使用“would”；“like”用法错误，应去掉或改为“maybe on”。

× The teachers will handle will hand a book borrowing ticket to the whole entire to the whole class.

✓ The teachers would hand a book borrowing ticket to the entire class.

重复使用“will handle will hand”错误，且“whole entire to the whole class”表达重复，应简化为“entire class”。

× Then we can borrow your books in the library.

✓ Then we could borrow books in the library.

“your books”不合适，应该是“books”，且时态应与上下文一致用过去时“could”。

× I think Chinese kids because they they go to live, they go to pubs, they usually go to public libraries because last on last weekend I went to the provincial library and I saw high school students and college students do self studies instead of reading books.

✓ I think Chinese kids usually go to public libraries because last weekend I went to the provincial library and saw high school and college students doing self-studies instead of reading books.

句子结构混乱，重复“they they go to live, they go to pubs”无意义，应删除；“do self studies”应改为“doing self-studies”。