图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Probeer je antwoord duidelijker en natuurlijker te maken door volledige zinnen te gebruiken en overbodige woorden te vermijden. Geef een direct antwoord en leg kort uit waarom je naar de bibliotheek gaat.

範例: Yes, I often go to the library to study because it is quiet and helps me focus on improving my portfolio.

建議: Gebruik verbindingswoorden om je antwoord vloeiender te maken en geef iets meer specifieke details over wat je doet. Vermijd korte, onsamenhangende zinnen.

範例: In the library, I usually study and work on completing my portfolio because I need to stay focused for my job.

建議: Formuleer je antwoord duidelijker en gebruik correcte grammatica. Geef een direct antwoord en leg uit waarom je wel of niet naar de bibliotheek ging als kind.

範例: I don't remember going to the library when I was a child, but I wish I had because it seems like a great place to learn.

建議: Probeer de vraag te begrijpen en geef een zo goed mogelijk antwoord. Als je iets niet begrijpt, vraag dan om verduidelijking, maar probeer eerst te antwoorden op basis van wat je denkt dat de vraag betekent.

範例: Yes, many Chinese kids often go to the library to read books and study after school.

× Yes, usually I go into the library for my study and maybe silence of the driving for My Portfolio, improve My Portfolio, I don't know like this.

✓ Yes, usually I go to the library to study and maybe work silently on my Portfolio to improve it, I don't know, something like that.

The original sentence uses 'silence of the driving' which is incorrect and unclear. The phrase 'for my study' should be 'to study' to express purpose. Also, 'improve My Portfolio' needs to be connected properly. Using 'work silently on my Portfolio to improve it' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× I usually go to the library, study and complete My Portfolio. That's it. I think because I'm focused in my job this time.

✓ I usually go to the library to study and complete my Portfolio. That's it. I think it's because I'm focused on my job at this time.

The phrase 'study and complete My Portfolio' should be preceded by 'to' to indicate purpose. Also, 'focused in my job' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'focused on my job'. 'This time' is better expressed as 'at this time'.

× I don't think so. I don't remember as a child go to the library, but I want it actually 'cause there is.

✓ I don't think so. I don't remember going to the library as a child, but I actually wanted to because there was one.

The phrase 'as a child go to the library' is incorrect; it should be 'going to the library as a child' using the gerund after 'remember'. 'I want it actually' should be 'I actually wanted to'. 'Cause there is' is incomplete; it should be 'because there was one' referring to a library.