图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating the same idea twice (e.g., mentioning 'library' multiple times). Also, try to use linking words to improve flow.

範例: I don't go to the library often, but I usually visit it before exams because it's quiet and helps me concentrate better.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Watching YouTube or movies in a library is unusual and may confuse the listener. Try to focus on typical activities and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

範例: In the library, I usually study, especially before exams, because it's quiet and comfortable. Sometimes, I also read books to relax.

建議: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and slightly unclear at the end. Make sure to finish your sentences and provide specific details. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

範例: Yes, I went to the library often in 4th and 5th grade because my mom volunteered there. I used to read books, study with her, and sometimes chat with other kids.

建議: Your answer is vague and contains grammatical errors. Try to express uncertainty clearly and avoid filler phrases like 'or something.' Use linking words to structure your opinion logically.

範例: I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but I believe children everywhere enjoy going to the library to find interesting new books to read.

× I'm usually watching some YouTube or movies in library or as I said before, I study especially before the exams because libraries are so quiet and very comfy and cozy.

✓ I usually watch some YouTube videos or movies in the library or, as I said before, I study especially before the exams because libraries are so quiet and very comfy and cozy.

The phrase 'I'm usually watching' incorrectly uses the present continuous tense for a habitual action. Habitual actions should use the simple present tense, so 'I usually watch' is correct. Also, 'some YouTube' is incomplete; it should be 'some YouTube videos.' Additionally, 'in library' is missing the article 'the.'

× Yes I did, especially when I was in 4th and 5th grade because my mom was doing volunteer in my school's library so I went there pretty often to read some books or study with my mom or talk to my.

✓ Yes, I did, especially when I was in 4th and 5th grade because my mom was volunteering in my school's library, so I went there pretty often to read some books, study with my mom, or talk to her.

The phrase 'was doing volunteer' is incorrect; the correct form is 'was volunteering' to indicate the ongoing past action. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'talk to my' which is incomplete; it should be 'talk to her' referring to the mom. Commas are added for clarity.

× I honestly don't know about the Chinese case because I'm Japanese, but I think however kids have the same habit to go to the library they wanted to find some new books that makes them interesting or something.

✓ I honestly don't know about the Chinese case because I'm Japanese, but I think kids have the same habit of going to the library because they want to find some new books that interest them or something.

The use of 'but I think however' is redundant and incorrect; 'but' or 'however' should be used alone. Also, 'have the same habit to go' should be 'have the same habit of going.' The phrase 'that makes them interesting' is incorrect; it should be 'that interest them' to correctly describe the books' effect on the kids.