图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答不够自然，句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并用连词连接细节，使表达更流畅。

範例: Yes, I often go to the library because I study at a chemistry school nearby. The teachers there are very helpful and the environment is quiet, which helps me concentrate better.

建議: 回答中有语法错误，表达不够准确。建议用更准确的词汇描述活动，并用连词使句子更连贯。

範例: I usually do my homework and read comic books or novels in the library. Moreover, studying there helps me focus because many people are reading quietly around me.

建議: 回答中时态和语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态，简洁明了地描述过去的习惯。

範例: Yes, when I was a kid, my mom often took me and my younger sister to the library on weekends. We usually read comic books and other interesting books there.

建議: 回答表达不够自然，语法错误较多。建议用更准确的表达说明原因，并用连词连接句子。

範例: Actually, I think Chinese kids often go to the library because they are very focused on their homework and grades. Therefore, they study hard and prefer a quiet place like the library to concentrate.

× Actually I did it very often to go to the library because I always go to the chem school.

✓ Actually, I went to the library very often because I always went to the chem school.

这里描述过去的习惯动作，应该使用过去时态。原句中“did”用法不当，且“go”应改为过去式“went”。

× Like we can study in current school and have teacher can teach me every every question if I feel problems and they are so nice and very quiet, you can make me feel.

✓ We can study in the current school and have teachers who can teach me every question if I have problems. They are so nice and very quiet, which makes me feel comfortable.

原句结构混乱，缺少连词和正确的从句结构，导致表达不清晰。需要调整句子结构，添加关系代词和连词，使句子完整通顺。

× have teacher can teach me every every question

✓ have teachers who can teach me every question

“teacher”应为复数形式“teachers”，因为指的是多个老师。

× I usually do my homework and see some comic book and watch some novels and everything I can study in the library and I can focus on that time because I have a lot of people read with me.

✓ I usually do my homework, read some comic books, and watch some novels. I can study in the library and focus at that time because there are a lot of people reading with me.

“see some comic book”应改为“read some comic books”，动词和名词搭配错误；“have a lot of people read with me”应改为“There are a lot of people reading with me”，使用了错误的句型和时态。

× Yeah, I have to go to the library and I'm a kid.

✓ Yeah, I had to go to the library when I was a kid.

描述过去的情况，应该使用过去时态，“have to”改为“had to”，“I'm a kid”改为“when I was a kid”。

× My mom always bring me to library at Saturday or Sunday like we can.

✓ My mom always brings me to the library on Saturday or Sunday.

“bring”应为第三人称单数形式“brings”；“to library”应为“to the library”；“at Saturday or Sunday”应为“on Saturday or Sunday”；“like we can”无意义，应删除。

× I always with my younger sister to go to library for reading some book like comic book or not.

✓ I always go to the library with my younger sister to read some books like comic books or others.

“I always with my younger sister to go”缺少动词，应为“I always go to the library with my younger sister”；“some book”应为复数“some books”；“like comic book or not”表达不清晰，改为“like comic books or others”。

× Actually, I think Chinese kids open to go to the library because they always very focused on their homework, focus on their score, so they will study hard for their homework.

✓ Actually, I think Chinese kids often go to the library because they are always very focused on their homework and their scores, so they study hard.

“open to go”用法错误，应为“often go”；“always very focused”缺少系动词“are”；“focus on their score”应改为“their scores”；“will study hard for their homework”时态和表达不当，改为“study hard”。

× So they will often to go to the library and focus on.

✓ So they often go to the library and focus there.

“will often to go”结构错误，应为“often go”；“focus on”后面缺少宾语，补充“there”使句子完整。