图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, đồng thời câu trả lời hơi dài dòng và không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn.

範例: No, I don't often go to the library because I prefer staying at home or playing outside with my friends.

建議: Câu trả lời thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, câu không mạch lạc và thiếu liên kết. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết các ý một cách logic.

範例: In the library, I usually read books quietly and sometimes talk softly with my friends.

建議: Bạn đã trả lời khá đầy đủ nhưng câu trả lời hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ. Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ, đồng thời sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

範例: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I preferred playing outside with my friends and studying at home. Also, there was no library in my neighborhood.

建議: Câu trả lời thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết các ý một cách logic, tránh dùng từ không chính xác hoặc không cần thiết.

範例: I'm not sure, but I think Chinese kids go to the library more often because they focus more on their studies compared to Vietnamese kids.

× Well I don't love being to the library because I just want to stay at home and play games, play outside with my friends, flying guys.

✓ Well I don't love going to the library because I just want to stay at home and play games, play outside with my friends, flying kites.

The phrase 'being to the library' is incorrect because 'being' is not used with 'to' in this context. The correct form is 'going to the library' to express the action of visiting a place. Also, 'flying guys' seems to be a mishearing or typo; it should be 'flying kites' which fits the context of playing outside.

× Do I umm I usually read books and talks with my friends but just and a little voice kinda.

✓ I usually read books and talk with my friends, but just a little bit quietly.

The verb 'talks' is incorrectly used; after 'I', the base form 'talk' should be used. Also, the sentence is fragmented and unclear; 'a little voice kinda' is not proper English. It is corrected to 'just a little bit quietly' to convey the intended meaning.

× No, because I just want to play outside, playing with my friends and flying kites and studying at my house.

✓ No, because I just want to play outside, play with my friends, fly kites, and study at my house.

After 'want to', the base form of verbs should be used, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'playing', 'flying', and 'studying' should be 'play', 'fly', and 'study' respectively.

× So I didn't go to the library because in my neighborhood there isn't any library.

✓ So I didn't go to the library because there isn't a library in my neighborhood.

The sentence structure is awkward. The phrase 'there isn't any library' is better expressed as 'there isn't a library' to indicate the absence of a singular noun. Also, placing 'there' at the beginning of the clause improves clarity.

× On this occasion, I don't know about as much, but I think they will go to the library more frequently because they study harder, their education more.

✓ On this occasion, I don't know much about it, but I think they go to the library more frequently because they study harder and have more education.

The phrase 'I don't know about as much' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't know much about it'. Also, 'they will go' is changed to 'they go' to express habitual action. The phrase 'their education more' is incomplete and corrected to 'have more education'.