图书馆— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you often go to the library?
考生
Hmm actually I don't go so much. I usually study at home and also I don't borrow books from Li library often.
考官
What do you usually do in the library?
考生
When I go there, I usually borrow books or study there. I think the library is a good place to study because it's very quiet and calm place so you can concentrate there.
考官
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
考生
Hmm. Well, when I was a kid, I didn't go to the library so much, but when I was a high school student, I went there every week with my friends because we had to study well. And yeah, it was near my house.
考官
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
考生
I don't know well because I have not been to China never, but I imagine that the Chinese child children go to the library often.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you often go to the library?
分數: 65.0建議: 回答は自然ですが、'Li library'という表現は誤りで、'the library'とすべきです。また、内容がやや冗長で、簡潔に答えることが望ましいです。例えば、'I usually study at home, so I don't go to the library often.'のようにまとめると良いでしょう。
範例: I usually study at home, so I don't go to the library often.
What do you usually do in the library?
分數: 75.0建議: 回答は内容が明確で、理由も述べられていますが、'quiet and calm place'の前に冠詞が抜けています。また、'so'の前にコンマを入れるとより自然です。接続詞を使って文をつなげると良いでしょう。
範例: When I go to the library, I usually borrow books or study there because it is a very quiet and calm place, so I can concentrate well.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
分數: 70.0建議: 回答は内容が具体的で良いですが、'so much'の使い方がやや不自然です。'often'や'frequently'の方が適切です。また、'And yeah'は口語的すぎるため、フォーマルな表現に変えると良いでしょう。
範例: When I was a kid, I didn't go to the library often, but in high school, I went there every week with my friends because we needed to study hard. It was also near my house.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
分數: 60.0建議: 文法的な誤りが多いです。'I have not been to China never'は二重否定で誤りです。'children'の重複も誤りです。より自然な表現に直し、推測を表す表現を使うと良いでしょう。
範例: I don't know for sure because I have never been to China, but I imagine that Chinese children often go to the library.
文法
× I usually study at home and also I don't borrow books from Li library often.
✓ I usually study at home and also I don't borrow books from the library often.
The word 'Li library' seems to be a typo or incorrect name; it should be 'the library' to refer to a specific place. Also, 'library' is singular and requires the definite article 'the' before it.
× I think the library is a good place to study because it's very quiet and calm place so you can concentrate there.
✓ I think the library is a good place to study because it's a very quiet and calm place so you can concentrate there.
The phrase 'very quiet and calm place' needs an indefinite article 'a' before 'very' because it is a singular countable noun. Without 'a', the sentence is grammatically incorrect.
× I imagine that the Chinese child children go to the library often.
✓ I imagine that Chinese children go to the library often.
The phrase 'child children' is redundant and incorrect. 'Children' is already the plural form of 'child', so 'child' should be removed.
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