图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi lặp lại và thiếu sự tự nhiên trong cách diễn đạt. Bạn nên tránh lặp lại cụm từ "take some book" và sử dụng câu trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I often go to the library to borrow academic books, such as those on math, literature, and English, to improve my knowledge.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn và tránh dùng từ không chính xác như "take a look after book". Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn về hoạt động của bạn trong thư viện.

範例: Usually, I borrow some books and then find a seat to read them carefully. I enjoy spending time studying in a quiet environment.

建議: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc không chính xác, ví dụ như "I often know my mother often take took me". Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ đơn đúng và câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: Absolutely yes. When I was a kid, my mother often took me to the library to read books.

建議: Bạn nên tránh dùng từ không chính xác như "is come from" và "take a look at the books". Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm ví dụ cụ thể hơn để làm rõ ý.

範例: Yes, they do because most of their knowledge comes from what they learn in the library. For example, they borrow books to study and improve their understanding.

× I often go to the library to take some book, take some book like academic book like math, literary, English to improve my knowledge.

✓ I often go to the library to take some books, some academic books like math, literature, and English to improve my knowledge.

The word 'book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to multiple items. Also, 'literary' should be 'literature' as it is the correct noun form for the subject area.

× So I often borrow some book, then I go to my seat and take a look after book.

✓ So I often borrow some books, then I go to my seat and take a look at the books.

'Book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to multiple items. The phrase 'take a look after book' is incorrect; it should be 'take a look at the books' to use the correct preposition and plural form.

× When I was a kid I often know my mother often take took me to the library to read books.

✓ When I was a kid, I often knew my mother often took me to the library to read books.

The verb 'know' should be in past tense 'knew' to match the past time frame. Also, 'take' should be 'took' as the past tense of 'take'.

× Yes, they do 'cause all of their knowledge and their intelligence is come from what they learn on the library.

✓ Yes, they do because all of their knowledge and intelligence come from what they learn in the library.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect here; it should be 'in' when referring to learning inside a place like a library. Also, 'is come' is incorrect; it should be 'come' to agree with the plural subject 'knowledge and intelligence'.