图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer clearer and more coherent by using correct sentence structures and linking words. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

範例: Yes, I often go to the library because it is close to my home and provides a quiet environment. I usually visit when I need to study or find information for my assignments.

建議: Focus on making your sentences grammatically correct and clear. Use linking words like 'and' or 'also' properly to connect ideas. Provide specific details about what you do and how the library helps you.

範例: I usually study in the library because it is very quiet, which helps me concentrate better. Also, the library has many resources and past exam papers that assist me in preparing for tests.

建議: Improve your sentence structure and use past tense correctly. Make your answer more natural by explaining your experience clearly and logically with linking words like 'because' and 'so'.

範例: Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid because my mother worked there. She used to take me with her, and I enjoyed the quiet atmosphere where everyone was reading or studying.

建議: Try to answer directly and clearly. Use correct grammar and avoid incomplete sentences. Use linking words like 'however' and 'because' properly to explain your ideas.

範例: Actually, I don't know much about Chinese kids going to the library. However, in my country, children are not allowed to go to the library because it is a quiet place meant for research and study.

× The library is very near from my home at the convent to go easily the light which the place is very quiet and became confident when I.

✓ The library is very near my home at the convent, so I can easily go there. The place is very quiet, and I become confident when I am there.

The phrase 'near from' is incorrect; 'near' should be used without 'from'. Also, the original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs to be split into clearer sentences with correct prepositions and verb forms to convey the intended meaning.

× I usually go to the library to study because it's very quiet which help me to can treat it better.

✓ I usually go to the library to study because it's very quiet, which helps me to concentrate better.

The pronoun 'which' refers to 'quiet' and should be followed by a singular verb 'helps' to agree in number. Also, 'help me to can treat it better' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'helps me to concentrate better' or similar.

× Also the the library have a wave of the resources and bulk information that assisted me to find more information that submit to be to be when or the past examination.

✓ Also, the library has a wealth of resources and a bulk of information that assist me in finding more information to submit for past examinations.

The subject 'library' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' not 'have'. 'Wave' is incorrect; the correct word is 'wealth'. The sentence is also unclear and needs restructuring for clarity and correct verb forms.

× Yes, I often go the library because my mother is working there.

✓ Yes, I often went to the library because my mother was working there.

The question is about past habits, so the past tense 'went' and 'was working' should be used instead of present tense 'go' and 'is working'. Also, the preposition 'to' is missing after 'go'.

× She used me to take with her.

✓ She used to take me with her.

The phrase 'used me to take with her' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'used to take me with her' to indicate a past habitual action.

× No one looked at me at the time.

✓ No one looked after me at the time.

The phrase 'looked at me' implies staring, but the intended meaning is likely 'looked after me', meaning to take care of me.

× I enjoy to say everybody is a quiet and reading for the reading or study and this is surprise me.

✓ I enjoy seeing that everybody is quiet and reading or studying, and this surprises me.

The phrase 'enjoy to say' is incorrect; 'enjoy seeing' or 'enjoy that' is correct. 'Everybody is a quiet' is incorrect; 'quiet' is an adjective and should not have 'a'. 'This is surprise me' should be 'this surprises me'.

× Actually, I don't have a lot of information about rules, libraries, Chinese kids.

✓ Actually, I don't have a lot of information about rules, libraries, or Chinese kids.

The list lacks the conjunction 'or' before the last item for clarity. Also, 'rules' and 'libraries' are plural, which is acceptable here.

× However, in my country the children or the kids is not allowed to go the library.

✓ However, in my country, children or kids are not allowed to go to the library.

'Children' and 'kids' are plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also, 'go the library' is missing the preposition 'to'.

× That's for several reasons. One of them, the the places is very quiet for the reasoning and research and spoke and.

✓ That's for several reasons. One of them is that the place is very quiet, suitable for reasoning and research.

The sentence is incomplete and contains errors. 'Places' should be singular 'place' to match 'is'. The phrase 'for the reasoning and research and spoke and' is unclear and should be corrected to 'suitable for reasoning and research'.