图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding filler words like 'well', 'uh', and 'yeah'. Also, organise your ideas clearly with linking words and correct grammar. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details using linking words such as 'because' or 'as'.

範例: Yes, I often go to the library because I find it a peaceful place to study and read. The quiet atmosphere helps me concentrate better compared to noisy environments, which makes my study sessions more effective and relaxing.

建議: Focus on answering the question directly with correct grammar and clearer vocabulary. Avoid vague phrases like 'delicious thing' when referring to activities. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: In the library, I usually read books or write notes. Sometimes, I also enjoy drinking coffee while studying because it helps me stay focused.

建議: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to give a direct response with clear reasons and avoid unnecessary fillers. Use linking words to explain your points logically.

範例: No, I did not often go to the library as a child because I was too young to read books by myself. Therefore, I preferred other activities instead.

建議: Improve clarity and grammar by using correct expressions and avoiding awkward phrases like 'waste their parents'. Use linking words to structure your answer logically and provide specific details.

範例: Yes, Chinese children often go to the library. When they are young, their parents usually borrow picture books for them. As they grow older, they tend to study there and sometimes drink coffee to help them concentrate on their assignments.

× Well, I would like to say that I often go there, yeah, for studying or reading a book.

✓ Well, I would like to say that I often go there, yeah, to study or read a book.

The verbs 'study' and 'read' should be in the base form after 'for' when expressing purpose. Using the gerund form '-ing' here is incorrect because 'for' followed by a verb usually takes the gerund only when indicating the function of something, but in this context, the infinitive form is more appropriate to express purpose.

× Uh, that's quite a leisure for me.

✓ Uh, that's quite leisurely for me.

The word 'leisure' is a noun, but here an adjective is needed to describe the experience. 'Leisurely' is the correct adjective form to describe something as relaxing or unhurried.

× So when I read a book or just studying, I think it's very relaxing.

✓ So when I read a book or just study, I think it's very relaxing.

The verbs connected by 'or' should be in the same form. 'Read' is in the base form, so 'studying' should be changed to 'study' to maintain parallel structure.

× Yeah, It has the quiet atmosphere, unlike the noisy place, so it really can make me get peaceful.

✓ Yeah, it has a quiet atmosphere, unlike a noisy place, so it really can make me feel peaceful.

'The' is a definite article used for specific things known to the listener. Here, 'quiet atmosphere' and 'noisy place' are general, so the indefinite article 'a' is appropriate. Also, 'make me get peaceful' is awkward; 'make me feel peaceful' is the correct expression.

× Well, there has several things to do in the library and one of them is read a book or just drinking a coffee.

✓ Well, there are several things to do in the library and one of them is reading a book or just drinking a coffee.

'There has' is incorrect; the correct form is 'there are' for plural subjects. Also, after 'is', the gerund form 'reading' and 'drinking' should be used to describe activities.

× And what's more is you can just writing something you like.

✓ And what's more is you can just write something you like.

After modal verbs like 'can', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form.

× Yeah, I think they're both delicious thing.

✓ Yeah, I think they're both delicious things.

'Thing' should be plural 'things' to agree with 'both'. Also, 'delicious' is an adjective correctly used here.

× When I was a kid and I could not remember the word.

✓ When I was a kid, I could not remember the word.

The sentence is incomplete and contains an unnecessary conjunction 'and'. Removing 'and' and adding a comma makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× So yeah, it's impossible for me to read a book at a young age.

✓ So yeah, it was impossible for me to read a book at a young age.

The sentence refers to a past time ('when I was a kid'), so the verb tense should be past ('was') instead of present ('is').

× As a result, I would not choose to go to the library.

✓ As a result, I did not choose to go to the library.

Since the context is past, 'would not choose' should be changed to simple past 'did not choose' to correctly reflect past action.

× Yeah, my answer is absolutely.

✓ Yeah, my answer is absolutely yes.

'Absolutely' is an adverb and needs to modify an adjective or verb. Adding 'yes' completes the expression to convey agreement.

× Because when they are young, they usually occasionally waste their parents to borrow some picture books.

✓ Because when they are young, they usually ask their parents to borrow some picture books.

'Waste' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is likely 'ask'. Also, 'usually occasionally' is contradictory; choosing one adverb is better. 'Usually' fits better in this context.

× And when they got older, they are likely to study there or just got a drink of coffee.

✓ And when they got older, they were likely to study there or just get a drink of coffee.

The sentence mixes past and present tense. 'Got older' is past, so 'are likely' should be 'were likely' and 'got a drink' should be 'get a drink' to maintain tense consistency.

× Yeah, to get more concentrated to the assignment.

✓ Yeah, to concentrate more on the assignment.

The correct phrase is 'concentrate on' something, not 'concentrated to'. Also, 'more concentrated' is an adjective form; here, the verb 'concentrate' is appropriate.