图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and natural by saying something like, "I don't often go to the library because I prefer reading at home where I feel more comfortable."

範例: I don't often go to the library because I prefer reading at home where I feel more comfortable.

建議: Your answer is very brief and has grammatical mistakes. Try to form a complete sentence with correct verb forms and add a bit more detail to make it natural and effective. For example, "When I go to the library, I usually look for books to read, especially novels or magazines."

範例: When I go to the library, I usually look for books to read, especially novels or magazines.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct verb forms and make your answer more concise and natural. For example, "I haven't liked going to the library since I was a kid because I prefer reading books by myself at home."

範例: I haven't liked going to the library since I was a kid because I prefer reading books by myself at home.

建議: Your answer has several grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use linking words to improve coherence. For example, "In my generation, it was not common for Chinese kids to go to the library. However, nowadays, more children and even parents visit libraries because the education environment is more competitive."

範例: In my generation, it was not common for Chinese kids to go to the library. However, nowadays, more children and even parents visit libraries because the education environment is more competitive.

× Actually, for me, I don't like to go to the library. I would rather to stay at home to reading some book because I feel in the library it's too quiet for me.

✓ Actually, for me, I don't like to go to the library. I would rather stay at home reading some books because I feel the library is too quiet for me.

The phrase 'would rather' should be followed by the base form of the verb without 'to', so 'would rather stay' is correct, not 'would rather to stay'. Also, after 'to' the verb should be in base form, but here 'to reading' is incorrect; it should be 'reading' as a gerund after 'stay at home'. Additionally, 'some book' should be plural 'some books' because 'some' is used with plural countable nouns.

× Actually, for me, I don't like to go to the library. I would rather to stay at home to reading some book because I feel in the library it's too quiet for me.

✓ Actually, for me, I don't like to go to the library. I would rather stay at home reading some books because I feel the library is too quiet for me.

The phrase 'in the library it's too quiet for me' is awkward. It is better to say 'the library is too quiet for me' to clearly express the idea. This corrects the 'there be' issue by properly structuring the sentence.

× If I go to the library, must be to find some of the books to reading the books. That's it.

✓ If I go to the library, it must be to find some books to read. That's it.

The phrase 'to reading the books' is incorrect; after 'to' we use the base form of the verb, so it should be 'to read'. Also, 'some of the books' is unnecessarily specific; 'some books' is more natural here. The sentence also needs 'it' as the subject before 'must be'.

× Actually from when I was a kid till now, I don't like go to the library and I will keep my opinion because I'm the one like to stay at home to reading the books by myself.

✓ Actually, from when I was a kid until now, I don't like going to the library and I will keep my opinion because I'm the one who likes to stay at home reading books by myself.

After 'like', the verb should be in the gerund form 'going' not 'go'. Also, 'to reading' is incorrect; it should be 'reading'. The phrase 'I'm the one like to stay' should be 'I'm the one who likes to stay' to include the relative pronoun and correct subject-verb agreement.

× Actually from when I was a kid till now, I don't like go to the library and I will keep my opinion because I'm the one like to stay at home to reading the books by myself.

✓ Actually, from when I was a kid until now, I don't like going to the library and I will keep my opinion because I'm the one who likes to stay at home reading books by myself.

The phrase 'the books' is too specific; 'books' without 'the' is more natural here. Also, 'to reading the books' is incorrect; it should be 'reading books'.

× Actually I think in my generation it's not popular to go to the library. Maybe I'm this generation have so many child they will choose go to the library.

✓ Actually, I think in my generation it's not popular to go to the library. Maybe in this generation there are so many children who will choose to go to the library.

'So many child' is incorrect; the plural form 'children' should be used. Also, the sentence structure is awkward; adding 'there are' clarifies the meaning. 'Choose go' should be 'choose to go'.

× Because in the China now the education environment is not easy, so every child need to go to the library to reading more books and even the parents.

✓ Because in China now the educational environment is not easy, every child needs to go to the library to read more books, and even the parents do.

The phrase 'in the China' is incorrect; 'in China' is correct. 'Education environment' should be 'educational environment' as an adjective. 'Need' should be 'needs' to agree with singular 'every child'. 'To reading' should be 'to read'. The sentence is improved by adding 'do' after 'parents' to complete the idea.