图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Améliorez la fluidité et évitez les répétitions inutiles. Par exemple, évitez de répéter des mots comme "to" ou "near" plusieurs fois. Utilisez des phrases plus naturelles et concises pour exprimer vos idées.

範例: I used to go to the library when I was preparing for my baccalaureate exam in 2017. It was a good experience because it provided a safe and quiet place to study. Moreover, it was conveniently located near my home, which made it easy to visit.

建議: Travaillez sur la clarté et la cohérence de vos réponses. Évitez les répétitions et utilisez des mots de liaison pour structurer votre réponse. Soyez plus précis sur ce que vous faisiez dans la bibliothèque.

範例: I usually studied for important exams like the baccalaureate and residency exams in the library. Although the library mainly had books on romance, I preferred to use my own study materials there because it was a quiet environment.

建議: Améliorez la structure de la phrase et évitez les répétitions. Par exemple, évitez de répéter "the culture" deux fois. Utilisez des phrases complètes et fluides.

範例: I don't remember going to the library as a child. Actually, my family didn't have a strong culture of visiting libraries, so I was the first member to start going there.

建議: Évitez les hésitations et les répétitions. Répondez directement à la question avec des phrases claires et utilisez des mots de liaison pour organiser votre réponse.

範例: I believe Chinese children often go to the library because the country has better infrastructure than Tunisia. There are many libraries available, which encourages children to visit them regularly.

× I used to to go to the library when I was preparing for my baccalaureate exam in 2017.

✓ I used to go to the library when I was preparing for my baccalaureate exam in 2017.

The phrase 'used to to go' contains a repeated word 'to'. This is a typographical error. The correct form is 'used to go' which indicates a past habitual action.

× I had a safe place and a quiet place to learn to.

✓ I had a safe place and a quiet place to learn.

The sentence ends with an unnecessary 'to' which is incorrect. The phrase 'a place to learn' is complete without the extra 'to' at the end.

× It was it was actually near near my near my home, near where I lived, so it was easy to go.

✓ It was actually near my home, near where I lived, so it was easy to go.

There are repeated words 'it was it was' and 'near near my near my' which are redundant and incorrect. Removing the duplicates makes the sentence grammatically correct and clearer.

× I was I, I was preparing for my residency exam.

✓ I was preparing for my residency exam.

The phrase 'I was I, I was' contains unnecessary repetition. The correct form is simply 'I was preparing for my residency exam.'

× So I used to, to study in there with my own resources.

✓ So I used to study there with my own resources.

The phrase 'study in there' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'study there' without 'in'. Also, the repeated 'to' is an error and should be removed.

× I didn't get the, the chance to, to use the library resources because it was mainly books and romance.

✓ I didn't get the chance to use the library resources because it mainly had books and romance.

The phrase 'it was mainly books and romance' is awkward. Changing it to 'it mainly had books and romance' clarifies the meaning. Also, repeated 'the' and 'to' should be removed.

× I didn't remember doing that.

✓ I don't remember doing that.

The verb 'remember' in this context should be in the present tense 'don't remember' because the speaker is talking about their current memory of a past event.

× My family didn't have quite the culture of the culture of libraries.

✓ My family didn't have much of a culture of libraries.

The phrase 'quite the culture of the culture of libraries' is redundant and awkward. Using 'much of a culture of libraries' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× I was the first member in the family visiting the library.

✓ I was the first member of the family to visit the library.

The phrase 'visiting the library' should be changed to the infinitive 'to visit the library' to correctly express the first occurrence. Also, 'in the family' is better as 'of the family'.

× Chinese kiss.

✓ Chinese kids.

The word 'kiss' is a typo and should be 'kids' to correctly refer to children.

× I think yes, they, they do go off into the library.

✓ I think yes, they do go to the library.

The phrase 'go off into the library' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'go to the library' when referring to visiting a place.