图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding filler words like 'like' and repeating similar ideas. Also, use correct grammar such as 'the library' and 'that makes me focused'.

範例: Yes, I usually go to the library about once a week because it helps me focus when I study or do my homework.

建議: Improve your answer by correcting grammar errors and using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, be more specific about what you borrow and avoid vague phrases like 'some work'.

範例: I usually do my homework in the library because the quiet atmosphere helps me concentrate. However, sometimes I borrow books to relax and enjoy reading.

建議: Avoid repeating similar ideas and filler words. Use correct grammar such as 'an outgoing girl' and 'I preferred playing outside'. Make your answer more concise and natural.

範例: No, I didn't go to the library much as a child because I was an outgoing girl who preferred playing outside rather than studying indoors.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and has grammar mistakes. Avoid vague or culturally sensitive statements without clear explanation. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and finish your sentences fully.

範例: Yes, many Chinese children often go to the library because their parents encourage them to study indoors rather than play outside, which is sometimes seen as misbehaving.

× Yes, I go to library about once a week because when I need to like study and also practice my learning skills and also like doing my homework, I will choose to study in the library because that's what make me focused.

✓ Yes, I go to the library about once a week because when I need to like study and also practice my learning skills and also like doing my homework, I will choose to study in the library because that's what makes me focused.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Also, 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'that'. Using 'the' before 'library' is necessary to make the sentence grammatically correct and natural in English.

× Yes, I go to library about once a week because when I need to like study and also practice my learning skills and also like doing my homework, I will choose to study in the library because that's what make me focused.

✓ Yes, I go to the library about once a week because when I need to like study and also practice my learning skills and also like doing my homework, I will choose to study in the library because that's what makes me focused.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'that'. Subject-verb agreement is important to ensure the verb matches the subject in number.

× I usually do my homework there because I find it help me to focus more because of the quiet atomosphere, but sometimes I will borrow some work there to relax.

✓ I usually do my homework there because I find it helps me to focus more because of the quiet atmosphere, but sometimes I will borrow some books there to relax.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'borrow some work' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'borrow some books' because 'work' is uncountable and does not fit here. The word 'atmosphere' was misspelled and corrected. Prepositions and word choice must be accurate for clarity and correctness.

× No actually, because when I was a kid I used to like play more instead of studying or reading in the library.

✓ No actually, because when I was a kid I used to like playing more instead of studying or reading in the library.

After 'used to like', the verb should be in the '-ing' form ('playing') to correctly express habitual past actions. Using the base form 'play' here is incorrect.

× I'm a outgoing girl so when I was a kid I was very naughty and I prefer like playing around and going outside instead of staying in the library.

✓ I'm an outgoing girl so when I was a kid I was very naughty and I preferred playing around and going outside instead of staying in the library.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a vowel sound as in 'outgoing'. Also, 'prefer' should be in past tense 'preferred' to match the past time frame 'when I was a kid'. The phrase 'prefer like playing' is awkward; 'preferred playing' is more natural.

× Actually yes, because playing outside is a symbol of naughty kids in Chinese culture. So lots of kids are not allowed to playing around outside and they are forced by their parents to reading or studying inside, so they will choose to stay in the.

✓ Actually yes, because playing outside is a symbol of naughty kids in Chinese culture. So lots of kids are not allowed to play around outside and they are forced by their parents to read or study inside, so they will choose to stay inside.

The verbs after 'allowed to' and 'forced to' should be in base form: 'play', 'read', 'study'. Using 'playing' and 'reading' is incorrect here. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'stay in the.' It should be 'stay inside' or 'stay in the house' for completeness and correctness.