图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Потрібно уникати зайвих пауз та заповнювачів (наприклад, "uh", "umm"), а також робити відповіді більш структурованими та чіткими. Використовуйте зв'язки між реченнями для кращої логіки та уникайте надмірної деталізації, яка не додає суті.

範例: I don't often go to the library in my hometown because there is only one library that opened recently. However, at my university in Kiev, we have a modern library with many books, which I enjoy visiting because it is very interesting.

建議: Відповідь слід робити більш чіткою та граматично правильною. Уникайте розмовних виразів типу "you know" і надавайте конкретніші деталі, пояснюючи свої уподобання.

範例: Usually, I read fiction books about wars because I am interested in stories that reflect modern times. This helps me understand history and its impact on today's world.

建議: Відповідь має бути граматично правильною і логічно побудованою. Уникайте незавершених речень і надавайте повні думки з конкретними деталями.

範例: When I was a child, there was no public library in my town, so I didn't visit one. However, we had a small collection of books about wars at home, which I often read.

建議: Відповідь повинна бути більш структурованою і граматично правильною. Уникайте повторів і використовуйте зв'язки для кращої логіки. Також намагайтеся давати більш конкретну інформацію або думку.

範例: I am not sure how often Chinese children go to libraries, but I have seen many videos on YouTube showing children studying in libraries to prepare for their exams.

× in our town we have only one library which was open at recently

✓ in our town we have only one library which was opened recently

The phrase 'was open at recently' is incorrect. The correct past participle form 'opened' should be used to indicate the library's recent opening. Also, 'at' is unnecessary here.

× right now I'm studying in Kiev and in our university we have a smart library with, umm, many books, which I like, so it's interesting

✓ right now I'm studying in Kiev and at our university we have a smart library with many books, which I like, so it's interesting

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to a university; 'at' is the correct preposition. Also, the phrase 'umm' is informal and can be omitted for clarity.

× Usually I got, you know, this fiction about some war

✓ Usually I get, you know, fiction about some war

The verb 'got' is past tense, but the sentence describes a habitual action, so the present tense 'get' should be used.

× I keen on something which can represent our latest age

✓ I am keen on something which can represent our latest age

The verb 'keen' requires the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the correct present tense expression 'I am keen on'. Without 'am', the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× Whenever a kid in our town we don't have library so I haven't been there for my old childhood

✓ When I was a kid in our town, we didn't have a library, so I hadn't been there during my childhood

The phrase 'Whenever a kid' is incorrect; it should be 'When I was a kid'. Also, 'we don't have library' lacks the article 'a'. The tense should be past to match the time frame.

× in our house we have little library which was with different book about war and maybe about

✓ In our house, we have a small library which has different books about war and maybe other topics

'Little' should be replaced with 'small' to describe the size of the library. Also, 'was with different book' is incorrect; it should be 'has different books'. The sentence is incomplete and needs clarification.

× I don't know something interesting about Chinese kids and how often they can go to library

✓ I don't know much about Chinese kids and how often they go to the library

The phrase 'go to library' requires the definite article 'the' before 'library'. Also, 'something interesting' is vague; 'much' fits better in this context.

× I saw many video in YouTube which represented the child who spent their own time in libraries studying there for their their exam

✓ I saw many videos on YouTube showing children who spent their time in libraries studying for their exams

'Video' should be plural 'videos'. The preposition 'in' should be 'on' for YouTube. 'The child who spent their own time' is awkward; 'children who spent their time' is better. Also, 'their their' is a repetition error.