图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating similar ideas and improve sentence structure. For example, instead of saying 'I don't like to stay in library or place like this,' you could say 'I prefer studying in my room because I find libraries uncomfortable.' Also, avoid unnecessary details like 'places where there are no chairs' which is confusing.

範例: No, I don't often go to the library because I prefer studying in my room where I feel more comfortable and can concentrate better.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. For example, start by saying what you usually do, then explain when and why. Avoid vague phrases like 'sometimes of things I can do.'

範例: When I go to the library, I usually work on assignments given by my teachers. Sometimes, I also use the time to read or revise my notes.

建議: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating ideas and improve sentence flow. For example, instead of 'I was quite ready for study in my home with my mom,' say 'I preferred studying at home with my mother.'

範例: No, I didn't go to the library as a child because I preferred studying at home with my mother, where I felt more comfortable.

建議: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and precise. Avoid awkward phrases like 'take breath naturally' and 'do anything in favor of them.' Instead, say 'Chinese children usually prefer outdoor places like parks or playgrounds because libraries are less enjoyable for them.'

範例: Not really. Chinese children usually prefer going to parks or playgrounds where they can play and relax, as libraries are often seen as less fun places.

× No, I don't often go to the library because I don't like to stay in library or place like this.

✓ No, I don't often go to the library because I don't like to stay in the library or places like this.

The sentence is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library' and 'place'. In English, when referring to a specific place like 'library', the definite article 'the' is required. Also, 'place' should be plural 'places' to match the context of 'like this'.

× I always prefer to study in my room or place where there are no chairs.

✓ I always prefer to study in my room or places where there are no chairs.

The word 'place' should be plural 'places' to agree with the context of multiple locations. Also, 'where there are no chairs' correctly describes the places, so plural is appropriate.

× Whenever I go for library that time I am doing several kinds of work.

✓ Whenever I go to the library, I do several kinds of work.

The correct preposition with 'go' and 'library' is 'to', not 'for'. Also, 'that time I am doing' is awkward and incorrect; simple present 'I do' fits better for habitual actions.

× It actually depends when they provide me assignment.

✓ It actually depends on when they provide me with an assignment.

The verb 'depends' requires the preposition 'on'. Also, 'provide me assignment' is incorrect; it should be 'provide me with an assignment' to be grammatically correct.

× That time I do the task of assignment provided by the teacher or sometimes of things I can do.

✓ At that time, I do the assignment tasks provided by the teacher or sometimes other things I can do.

'That time' should be 'At that time' to indicate a specific time. 'Task of assignment' is awkward; 'assignment tasks' is clearer. 'Sometimes of things I can do' is incorrect; 'sometimes other things I can do' is better.

× To be honest, I didn't even go to library when I was a kid because in my childhood I didn't prefer to go for studying in library.

✓ To be honest, I didn't even go to the library when I was a kid because in my childhood I didn't prefer to study in the library.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library'. Also, 'go for studying' is incorrect; the correct form is 'prefer to study'.

× Rather I I was quite ready for study in my home with my mom.

✓ Rather, I was quite ready to study at home with my mom.

'Ready for study' should be 'ready to study'. Also, 'in my home' is better expressed as 'at home' in English.

× Not like that. Chinese kids don't often go to library because they prefer to go places like park or playground where they can take breath naturally or quite comfortably, because in library they can't do anything in favor of them.

✓ Not like that. Chinese kids don't often go to the library because they prefer to go to places like parks or playgrounds where they can breathe naturally and comfortably, because in the library they can't do anything beneficial for them.

'Go to library' needs 'the' before 'library'. 'Places like park or playground' should be plural 'parks or playgrounds'. 'Take breath' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'breathe'. 'In favor of them' is incorrect; 'beneficial for them' is more appropriate.