图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は自然ですが、"I often buy them rather than going to the library and borrowing the books"の部分が少し冗長です。より簡潔に表現し、理由をもう少し具体的に述べると良いでしょう。例えば、なぜ本を所有したいのか、どんな種類の本を買うのかを加えると効果的です。

範例: No, I don't often go to the library because I prefer to buy books. Owning them allows me to read anytime and keep my favorite ones for future reference.

建議: 文法ミス（"watching"は"watch"に）と語順の問題があります。また、回答が短く具体性に欠けます。図書館での活動を詳しく説明し、接続詞を使って文をつなげると良いでしょう。

範例: In my university library, I usually study and watch on-demand classes because it is a quiet place with good internet access.

建議: "books books"の繰り返しや"asked my mother to borrow the books instead of me"の表現が不自然です。より自然な表現に直し、なぜ母親に借りてもらったのか理由を加えると良いでしょう。

範例: Yes, I used to go to the library with my mother when I was a kid. I loved reading cartoons, so my mother often borrowed the books for me because I was too young to do it myself.

建議: 文法的な誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。"I'm not familiar with"や"because"などの接続詞を使い、文を整理して話すと良いでしょう。また、推測を述べる際は明確に表現してください。

範例: I'm Japanese, so I'm not very familiar with the habits of Chinese kids. However, because their entrance exams are very strict, I think they probably go to the library often to study.

× In the library of my university I usually study and watching on demand classes.

✓ In the library of my university I usually study and watch on demand classes.

The verb 'watching' is incorrectly used after 'and' which connects two verbs. Both verbs should be in the base form 'study' and 'watch' to maintain parallel structure.

× I like reading cartoons, so I asked my mother to borrow the books books instead of me.

✓ I liked reading cartoons, so I asked my mother to borrow the books for me.

The verb 'like' should be in past tense 'liked' to match the past context 'when you were a kid'. Also, 'instead of me' is incorrect here; 'for me' is the correct phrase to indicate borrowing on behalf of the speaker.

× I asked my mother to borrow the books books instead of me.

✓ I asked my mother to borrow the books for me.

The phrase 'instead of me' is incorrect in this context. The correct expression is 'for me' to indicate that the mother borrowed the books on the speaker's behalf.

× Umm I'm Japanese so I don't familiar with the Chinese kids habits but entrance exam is of China is very strict so I think maybe they often go to the library I think.

✓ Umm I'm Japanese so I am not familiar with Chinese kids' habits but the entrance exam in China is very strict so I think maybe they often go to the library.

The phrase 'I don't familiar' is incorrect; it should be 'I am not familiar'. Also, 'the Chinese kids habits' needs a possessive form 'Chinese kids' habits'. 'Entrance exam is of China' should be 'entrance exam in China'. The sentence is also improved by removing the repeated 'I think'.