图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by using correct grammar and avoiding redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'since'. For example, say 'I rarely go to the library because I can find all the information I need on my laptop or online, even when I do research at university.'

範例: I rarely go to the library because I can find all the information I need on my laptop or online. For instance, when I do research at university, I use digital sources instead of physical books.

建議: Make your answer more direct and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then add specific details using linking words like 'for example' or 'because'. Also, correct grammar and avoid vague phrases. For example, say 'People usually go to the library to read books or find information because it is a quiet place.'

範例: People usually go to the library to read books or find information. For example, students use the library to study quietly and access various resources.

建議: Use past tense correctly and make your answer clearer and more natural. Start with a direct answer, then explain with specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'although'. For example, say 'No, I did not go to the library when I was a kid because I could find information online. However, sometimes I wanted to visit.'

範例: No, I did not go to the library when I was a kid because I could find information online. However, sometimes I wanted to visit the library to explore books.

建議: Improve grammar and sentence structure for clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'also'. For example, say 'Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because it helps them study in a quiet environment and access a wide range of information.'

範例: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because it provides a quiet place to study and access a large amount of information, which helps keep their minds open to the world.

× No, I never go to the library because every box or everything we can we I can find in the my laptop or in the website.

✓ No, I never go to the library because everything I need, I can find on my laptop or on websites.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'every box or everything' which is confusing and ungrammatical. 'Every box' is unclear and unnecessary. 'Everything' is singular and should be used alone. Also, 'in the my laptop' is incorrect; it should be 'on my laptop'. Similarly, 'in the website' should be 'on websites' because we use 'on' for digital platforms and 'website' should be plural or general.

× Even when I am in the university I making a research my my sources, all of them in the laptops.

✓ Even when I am at the university, I am doing research; all my sources are on my laptop.

The phrase 'I making a research' is incorrect; the verb 'make' should be in the present continuous form 'am making' or better 'am doing' because 'do research' is the correct collocation. Also, 'in the university' should be 'at the university' as the correct preposition. 'My my sources' is a repetition error. 'All of them in the laptops' should be 'all my sources are on my laptop' for clarity and correct preposition.

× I think many people go to the library to reading a book or find some resources or find some information needed for something.

✓ I think many people go to the library to read a book or find some resources or information needed for something.

After 'to' (a preposition or part of an infinitive), the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'to reading' should be 'to read'. The rest of the sentence is acceptable.

× Because that we go to the library and in the library we must be quiet and even just.

✓ That is why we go to the library, and in the library, we must be quiet and respectful.

The sentence starts with 'Because that' which is ungrammatical and incomplete. It should be rephrased to 'That is why' or 'Because of that'. Also, 'even just' is unclear and likely a misuse; 'respectful' or 'considerate' fits better. The sentence structure is fragmented and needs to be connected properly.

× No, I don't go to the library when I could or when I am young.

✓ No, I didn't go to the library when I was a child or when I was young.

The question is about past habits, so past tense should be used. 'Don't go' is present tense and incorrect here. 'When I could' is incorrect; likely meant 'when I was a child'. 'When I am young' should be 'when I was young' to match past tense.

× I want to go to the library sometimes, but no, I can't find any information or any sources in the digital or online because that, but sometimes I would go.

✓ I wanted to go to the library sometimes, but I couldn't find any information or sources online; however, sometimes I would go.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. 'I want' should be 'I wanted' to match past context. 'Can't find' should be 'couldn't find' for past ability. 'Because that' is unclear and should be omitted or replaced. 'Sometimes I would go' is correct for past habitual action.

× Yeah, I think the Chinese kids going to the library to studies to keeping this mind opening to the whole world the big information.

✓ Yeah, I think Chinese kids go to the library to study to keep their minds open to the vast information of the world.

'Kids going' should be 'kids go' for subject-verb agreement. 'To studies' is incorrect; it should be 'to study' (base form after 'to'). 'To keeping' should be 'to keep'. 'This mind opening' is incorrect; it should be 'their minds open'. 'The big information' is awkward; 'vast information' or 'a lot of information' is better.

× Also the Chinese kids must studies in the quiet place and the library is the perfect place to go study there.

✓ Also, Chinese kids must study in a quiet place, and the library is the perfect place to study.

'Must studies' is incorrect; modal verbs like 'must' are followed by the base form of the verb, so it should be 'must study'. 'The quiet place' should be 'a quiet place' as it is general. 'To go study there' is awkward; 'to study' suffices.