图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but a bit repetitive and could be more concise. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words to connect your points smoothly. Also, use varied vocabulary to express convenience and accessibility.

範例: No, I don't visit the library often because there isn't one near my town. Moreover, it's very convenient to read books at home and access information online easily.

建議: Your answer is clear but contains repetition and could be more fluent. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating phrases. Also, specify your preferences with more precise vocabulary.

範例: Although there is no library nearby, whenever I visit one with my friends, I prefer reading books about history, vocabulary, and stories.

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words like 'because' and 'moreover' appropriately and avoid redundancy. Also, try to keep sentences concise.

範例: No, I didn't go to the library as a child because I preferred playing outside. Moreover, my family had many books at home, so I usually read those instead.

建議: Your answer is honest but could be more structured and grammatically correct. Avoid vague phrases like 'I feel' and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, correct subject-verb agreement and be more specific if possible.

範例: To be honest, I don't know much about Chinese children, but I believe they prefer playing in play areas rather than visiting libraries.

× I have no library because I have no nearby library in my town.

✓ I have no library because there is no nearby library in my town.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'I have no library' which is awkward and unclear. The correct expression is 'there is no nearby library' to indicate the absence of a library in the town. This relates to the 'There be issue' but primarily involves singular/plural and sentence structure. Using 'there is' correctly introduces the existence or non-existence of something.

× And it's also very convenient to read books at home and collecting online information is also very easy.

✓ It is also very convenient to read books at home, and collecting online information is also very easy.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is generally informal and can be avoided in formal speech. Also, the sentence is a run-on and needs a comma before 'and' to separate two independent clauses. This improves sentence structure and clarity.

× But whenever I but whenever I go to the library with my friends, I always prefer to read some books related to history, vocabulary and stories.

✓ But whenever I go to the library with my friends, I always prefer to read some books related to history, vocabulary, and stories.

The phrase 'but whenever I but whenever I' is a repetition error. Removing the repeated phrase corrects the sentence. Also, a comma is needed before 'and' in a list for clarity.

× I preferred playing outside more than going to library and moreover my family had a lot of books at home so I prefer always prefer to read them.

✓ I preferred playing outside more than going to the library, and moreover, my family had a lot of books at home, so I always prefer to read them.

The phrase 'going to library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library'. Also, 'prefer always prefer' is a repetition error; correcting to 'always prefer' is necessary. Commas are added for better sentence flow.

× I feel the children likes to go to the play area more than going to the library.

✓ I feel the children like to go to the play area more than going to the library.

The subject 'children' is plural, so the verb should be 'like' instead of 'likes' to maintain subject-verb agreement.