图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa chính xác, ví dụ như "It helped me" nên là "It helps me" để phù hợp với thì hiện tại. Bạn cũng nên tránh lặp từ và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I usually go to the library because it is a quiet place where I can study or work without distractions. Moreover, I can borrow books instead of buying them, which is very convenient.

建議: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi ở thì hiện tại vì câu hỏi dùng thì hiện tại. Ngoài ra, tránh lặp từ như "it's it's" và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và đầy đủ hơn.

範例: I usually study and work in the library because it is quiet, which helps me concentrate. I also like to read books there during my free time.

建議: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ "to bought" nên là "to buy". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh ngắt quãng giữa câu. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để nối các ý và làm câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: Actually, no. When I was a child, I usually went to the bookstore to buy books and other study materials.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ "famous about the hard working and difficult" không đúng. Bạn nên dùng từ vựng chính xác và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm ví dụ cụ thể.

範例: From what I know, Chinese kids often go to the library because education is highly valued in China. They are known for their hard work and dedication to studying.

× It helped me focus on my work and also I can borrow without buying it.

✓ It helps me focus on my work and also I can borrow books without buying them.

The sentence mixes past tense 'helped' with present tense 'can'. Since the context is habitual action, present tense 'helps' is appropriate. Also, 'borrow' should be followed by the object 'books' and 'them' to refer to books, improving clarity.

× When I was in the college, I used to work and study in the library because it's it's quiet and I can read book or do my own work.

✓ When I was in college, I used to work and study in the library because it's quiet and I can read books or do my own work.

The phrase 'in the college' is incorrect; 'in college' is the correct expression. Also, 'read book' should be plural 'read books' to match the context. The repeated 'it's' is a typographical error and should be corrected to a single 'it's'.

× Actually no, but when I was a child I. Went to the bookstore to bought the book and some stuff for my study.

✓ Actually no, but when I was a child I went to the bookstore to buy books and some stuff for my study.

The verb 'bought' is incorrectly used after 'to'; after 'to' the base form 'buy' should be used. Also, 'the book' should be plural 'books' to match the context. The period after 'I' is a typographical error and should be removed.

× From my knowledge, I think the Chinese kids often go to the library because, you know, Chinese education is very important and famous about the hard working and difficult.

✓ From my knowledge, I think Chinese kids often go to the library because, you know, Chinese education is very important and famous for hard work and diligence.

The phrase 'famous about' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'famous for'. Also, 'hard working and difficult' is awkward; 'hard work and diligence' is a better collocation to express the intended meaning.