图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Apni answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar 'uh' er moto filler words komate hobe. Apni sentence gulo ke aro natural korte paren, ebong kichu linking words use korte paren jate answer ta fluent lage. Example hisebe, apni bolte paren, "I go to the library from time to time because I can learn about different types of books, such as stories about incidents and famous people."

範例: I go to the library from time to time because I can learn about different types of books, such as stories about incidents and famous people.

建議: Apnar answer e kichu grammar mistake ache, ar sentence structure improve kora dorkar. Apni direct question er uttor dite paren, tarpor kichu supporting details dite paren linking word diye. Example hisebe, "I usually prefer to read books in the library because it helps me concentrate better."

範例: I usually prefer to read books in the library because it helps me concentrate better.

建議: Apnar uttor e grammar ar clarity improve kora dorkar. Apni simple ar clear sentence use korben, ar unnecessary words komaben. Apni bolte paren, "I didn't go to the library when I was a child because my parents were busy with their work as government employees, so I didn't have time."

範例: I didn't go to the library when I was a child because my parents were busy with their work as government employees, so I didn't have time.

建議: Apnar answer e kichu grammar ar vocabulary error ache. Apni clear ar simple sentence use korben. Linking word use kore answer ke aro fluent korte paren. Example hisebe, "Actually, I don't know much about Chinese kids, but in my country, many children prefer to go to the library to gain knowledge."

範例: Actually, I don't know much about Chinese kids, but in my country, many children prefer to go to the library to gain knowledge.

× From time to time I prefer to uh go library.

✓ From time to time I prefer to go to the library.

The verb 'go' requires the preposition 'to' before a place. So, 'go library' is incorrect; it should be 'go to the library'. This is a common preposition usage error.

× When I uh go in library then I can acquire knowledge about different types of books such as stories such as incident and such as uh famous person.

✓ When I go to the library, I can acquire knowledge about different types of books such as stories, incidents, and books about famous people.

The phrase 'go in library' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'go to the library'. Also, 'such as incident' should be plural 'incidents', and 'such as famous person' should be 'books about famous people' for clarity and correctness.

× I don't prefer to lots of things in library.

✓ I don't prefer to do lots of things in the library.

The phrase 'prefer to lots of things' is incorrect. The verb 'prefer' should be followed by an infinitive verb or a gerund. Also, 'in library' needs the article 'the'. So, the correct sentence is 'I don't prefer to do lots of things in the library.'

× Whenever I go in a library then I always prefers to read book in a concentrate way.

✓ Whenever I go to a library, I always prefer to read books in a concentrated way.

The phrase 'go in a library' should be 'go to a library'. Also, 'prefers' should be 'prefer' to agree with the subject 'I'. 'Read book' should be plural 'read books'. 'In a concentrate way' should be 'in a concentrated way' to use the correct adjective form.

× I I don't go library when I was a child because of my parents always busy with their wives as as he, as my mother's and my father's doing government job.

✓ I didn't go to the library when I was a child because my parents were always busy with their work, as my mother and father were doing government jobs.

The sentence mixes present tense 'don't go' with past time 'when I was a child'. It should be past tense 'didn't go'. 'Go library' needs 'to the library'. 'Busy with their wives' is incorrect; likely meant 'busy with their work'. Also, 'doing government job' should be 'doing government jobs'.

× That's why I don't get time to go library.

✓ That's why I didn't get time to go to the library.

Since the context is past tense, 'don't get' should be 'didn't get'. Also, 'go library' requires the preposition 'to' as 'go to the library'.

× Actually, I don't any idea about chapter Chinese kids, but if I talk about my country's kids, then many children prefers to go library acquire their to acquire their knowledge.

✓ Actually, I don't have any idea about Chinese kids, but if I talk about my country's kids, many children prefer to go to the library to acquire knowledge.

The phrase 'I don't any idea' is missing the verb 'have'. 'Chapter Chinese kids' is incorrect; likely meant 'about Chinese kids'. 'Many children prefers' should be 'many children prefer' to agree with plural subject. 'Go library' needs 'to the library'. The phrase 'acquire their to acquire their knowledge' is redundant and incorrect; simplified to 'to acquire knowledge'.