图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp lại thông tin không cần thiết. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để làm cho câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I don't often go to the library because my hometown is small and doesn't have a public library. Therefore, I usually read books at home instead.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp và trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về hoạt động bạn làm trong thư viện.

範例: I usually study and prepare for my classes when I go to the library at my university. It is a quiet place that helps me focus.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng và câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để liên kết các ý và cung cấp lý do cụ thể hơn.

範例: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a child because my hometown was quiet and didn't have a public library. Also, I had many books at home, so I didn't need to visit one.

建議: Bạn nên trả lời câu hỏi một cách lịch sự và cố gắng đưa ra ý kiến hoặc dự đoán nếu không chắc chắn. Tránh nói sai ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but I think many children in China do go to the library to study and read books regularly.

× there are Public Library

✓ there is a Public Library

The phrase 'Public Library' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' instead of 'are'. Also, the singular noun requires the indefinite article 'a'.

× So when there was a choice, I don't know what is the library to go to.

✓ So when there was a choice, I didn't know which library to go to.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly and uses an awkward structure. 'Didn't know' matches the past tense 'was', and 'which library to go to' is the correct phrasing.

× I do not afford go to the library

✓ I cannot afford to go to the library

The verb 'afford' requires 'can' as a modal verb and the infinitive form 'to go'. 'Do not afford go' is incorrect.

× the last time when I go to the library is was when I go to my university

✓ the last time I went to the library was when I went to my university

The past tense 'went' should be used consistently to describe past events. 'Go' is present tense and incorrect here.

× I decided to go to the library to repairing for my classes

✓ I decided to go to the library to prepare for my classes

After 'to' (to + verb), the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. 'Repairing' is incorrect; 'prepare' fits the context.

× I do not go to the library when I was a child

✓ I did not go to the library when I was a child

The negative past tense requires 'did not' plus the base verb. 'Do not go' is present tense and incorrect for past events.

× It has two big reasons

✓ There are two big reasons

To express existence of multiple reasons, 'There are' is correct. 'It has' is awkward and less natural here.

× my home that is quiet and it doesn't have a Public Library

✓ my hometown is quiet and it doesn't have a public library

'Hometown' is more appropriate than 'home' in this context. Also, 'public library' should not be capitalized unless part of a proper noun.

× that's my room have every book that I want

✓ my room has every book that I want

The subject 'my room' is singular and requires the verb 'has'. 'Have' is plural form and incorrect here.

× I actually doesn't have to go travel to Chinese

✓ I actually don't have to travel to China

The subject 'I' pairs with 'don't' not 'doesn't'. Also, 'go travel to Chinese' is incorrect; 'travel to China' is correct.

× I am Vietnamese kids

✓ I am a Vietnamese kid

The subject 'I' is singular, so 'kid' should be singular and preceded by 'a'. 'Kids' is plural and incorrect here.