图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific supporting details using correct grammar and vocabulary. Avoid redundancy and awkward phrasing.

範例: I don't often go to the library nowadays. However, when I was at university, I visited the library to borrow books related to my major project research.

建議: Focus on using correct grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Be specific and avoid vague phrases. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences for clarity.

範例: Usually, I borrow books related to my course and read the information I need. After finishing, I return the books to the library staff. Sometimes, I also chat with my friends there.

建議: Answer the question directly with a clear topic sentence. Use correct tenses and grammar. Avoid unclear or awkward expressions. Provide specific reasons or examples to support your answer.

範例: I don't remember going to the library often as a child. However, if I become a mother in the future, I would definitely take my child to the library to encourage reading, especially since there are many books designed just for children nowadays.

建議: Try to express your opinion more clearly and use correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then support it with specific details or examples. Avoid vague or incorrect phrases.

範例: I'm not entirely sure, but I believe many Chinese children often visit libraries. Chinese people generally value reading and education, so it's common for parents to encourage their children to go to the library.

× May sometimes I chatting with my friend on library.

✓ Sometimes I chat with my friend in the library.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'May sometimes' and 'chatting' which is a present participle form without an auxiliary verb. The correct form is 'Sometimes I chat' to express habitual action. Also, the preposition 'on' is incorrect here; 'in the library' is the proper phrase.

× I entered to the library to take a book which is related to our search which is for my major project.

✓ I entered the library to take a book which is related to our research for my major project.

The verb 'enter' does not require the preposition 'to' after it. Also, 'search' should be 'research' in this context. The phrase 'which is for my major project' is better combined with 'research' for clarity.

× I borrow a book and read about an information that I needed which is related to my course and after that I returned the book back to the admin of the library.

✓ I borrowed a book and read information that I needed which was related to my course, and after that I returned the book to the admin of the library.

The sentence mixes present tense 'borrow' and 'read' with past tense 'needed' and 'returned'. Since the action is in the past, all verbs should be in past tense. Also, 'an information' is incorrect; 'information' is uncountable and does not take 'an'. 'Returned the book back' is redundant; 'returned the book' suffices.

× May sometimes I chatting with my friend on library.

✓ Sometimes I chat with my friend in the library.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect when referring to being inside a building; 'in the library' is correct.

× I don't clearly have an idea about this, but I know that Chinese citizen they are admire of reading and searching for that.

✓ I don't clearly have an idea about this, but I know that Chinese citizens admire reading and researching.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'they are admire' which is ungrammatical. The correct form is 'admire' as a verb. Also, 'Chinese citizen' should be plural 'Chinese citizens' to match the context.

× if I am being a mother on next years I would take my child to a library to choose a book.

✓ If I become a mother in the next few years, I will take my child to the library to choose a book.

The phrase 'am being a mother' is incorrect; 'become a mother' is the correct expression. 'On next years' should be 'in the next few years'. Also, 'would' is conditional; since this is a future plan, 'will' is more appropriate.

× I think a lot of Chinese enter their child and goes to library.

✓ I think a lot of Chinese take their children and go to the library.

'Child' should be plural 'children' to match 'a lot of Chinese'. The verbs 'enter' and 'goes' do not agree with the plural subject; 'take' and 'go' are correct. Also, 'goes to library' should be 'go to the library'.