图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use correct prepositions and avoid repeating words. Also, keep your answer concise and natural by limiting to 3-4 sentences.

範例: No, I don't go to the library often because I am busy with my marketing job. Therefore, I prefer reading ebooks or PDFs, which are more convenient for me.

建議: Your answer is unclear and has many repetitions and grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid repeating words and be specific about the types of articles.

範例: I usually read research articles related to my thesis in the library because these articles are not easily found elsewhere. Additionally, I collect information from various sources to support my study.

建議: Your answer is confusing and contains many grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to use simple sentences and clearly explain your childhood experience. Avoid unnecessary words and focus on the main idea.

範例: Yes, when I was a child, I often went to the library to read comics and storybooks. These books were not allowed at home, so the library was my only place to enjoy them.

建議: Your answer is good but has some grammatical mistakes and repetitive words. Use correct sentence structures and avoid repeating words. Also, try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

範例: Yes, in China, it is common for kids to go to the library because it is a place where they can explore various books. They can read academic books, comics, storybooks, or books related to science.

× No, actually I do not go library very often because currently I am doing a marketing related job.

✓ No, actually I do not go to the library very often because currently I am doing a marketing related job.

The verb 'go' requires the preposition 'to' before a place. So, 'go library' is incorrect; it should be 'go to the library'. This is a common preposition usage error.

× I couldn't find too much time to go library.

✓ I couldn't find too much time to go to the library.

Again, 'go' needs the preposition 'to' before the place. 'Go library' is incorrect; it should be 'go to the library'.

× That's why I prefer ebook or PDF.

✓ That's why I prefer ebooks or PDFs.

When talking about countable nouns in general, plural form is used without an article. Also, 'ebook' and 'PDF' should be pluralized to 'ebooks' and 'PDFs' to indicate general preference for these formats.

× PDF to to read.

✓ I use PDFs to read.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding a subject and verb clarifies the meaning. 'PDF to to read' is not a proper sentence structure.

× I usually read different types of articles in my in my in the library who is related with my thesis, thesis topic and these types of research articles couldn't found easily anywhere else anywhere else and also also collecting some of the information information from different types.

✓ I usually read different types of articles in the library that are related to my thesis topic, and these types of research articles can't be found easily anywhere else. I also collect some information from different sources.

The sentence has multiple issues: repeated phrases, incorrect relative pronoun 'who' for articles (should be 'that' or 'which'), incorrect preposition 'related with' (should be 'related to'), incorrect verb form 'couldn't found' (should be 'can't be found'), and incomplete phrase 'different types'. The correction addresses these errors and improves clarity.

× Yes, when I work it, I will be open very often go to the library to read different types of comics and different types of story books or sometimes of issue books because these types of books are not allowed in my house because my mother always has called me due to the due to reading books except my.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid, I often went to the library to read different types of comics, story books, or sometimes issue books because these types of books were not allowed in my house. My mother always scolded me for reading books except mine.

The original sentence has many tense and structure errors: 'when I work it' is incorrect, should be 'when I was a kid'; 'I will be open very often go' is incorrect, should be 'I often went'; 'has called me' should be past tense 'scolded me'; sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction uses past tense consistently and clarifies meaning.

× Yes, in China this must for the kids to go to library because library is the place where the kids can explore everything he or she wants.

✓ Yes, in China it is a must for kids to go to the library because the library is the place where kids can explore everything they want.

The phrase 'this must for the kids' is incorrect; it should be 'it is a must for kids'. Also, 'go to library' needs the article 'the' before 'library'. Pronouns 'he or she' can be replaced with 'they' for simplicity and correctness.

× He he can read his academic books or comics or story books or some scientific knowledge related books.

✓ They can read academic books, comics, story books, or some books related to scientific knowledge.

The repeated 'He he' is incorrect. Also, 'his' is not appropriate when referring generally to kids; 'they' is better. The phrase 'scientific knowledge related books' is better expressed as 'books related to scientific knowledge'.