图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but a bit long and repetitive. Try to make your response more concise and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you can say, "I don't often go to the library these days because I am free from exams. However, in the past, I used to go to the library near my house to study."

範例: I don't often go to the library these days because I am free from exams. However, in the past, I used to go to the library near my house to study.

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks coherence. Try to avoid repeating the same words and use linking words to make your answer flow better. Also, be more specific about what you do in the library. For example, you can say, "I usually go to the library to study and prepare my assignments, especially when the submission deadline is near. Besides studying, I sometimes go there just to sit and relax."

範例: I usually go to the library to study and prepare my assignments, especially when the submission deadline is near. Besides studying, I sometimes go there just to sit and relax.

建議: Your answer is clear but a bit long and has some grammatical errors. Try to use correct verb forms and make your sentences shorter and clearer. For example, you can say, "No, I didn't use to go to the library as a child because there was no library in my town. We had to travel 7 to 8 miles to reach one, which was difficult for me."

範例: No, I didn't use to go to the library as a child because there was no library in my town. We had to travel 7 to 8 miles to reach one, which was difficult for me.

建議: Your answer has good content but some vocabulary and grammar mistakes. Use correct adverbs and plural forms. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas. For example, you can say, "Yes, I think Chinese kids often go to the library because their houses are small and lack proper study space. Therefore, they prefer studying in the library."

範例: Yes, I think Chinese kids often go to the library because their houses are small and lack proper study space. Therefore, they prefer studying in the library.

× I do not usually go to library.

✓ I do not usually go to the library.

In English, when referring to a specific place like 'library', the definite article 'the' is required. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect because it specifies a particular place.

× I usually go to library for my preparations.

✓ I usually go to the library for my preparations.

The definite article 'the' is necessary before 'library' to indicate a specific place. Without 'the', the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× I prefer preparing my assignments in library whenever due date for submission of assignments is near.

✓ I prefer preparing my assignments in the library whenever the due date for submission of assignments is near.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' and 'due date' to specify particular things. Omitting 'the' leads to incorrect grammar.

× I usually go there to sit.

✓ I usually go there to sit.

This sentence is grammatically correct and does not require any correction.

× No, I didn't used to go to library when I was a kid because in my town where I used to live in my childhood, there was no library and and to go to a library we have to travel almost 7 to 8 miles and that was a difficult task for me as being a child.

✓ No, I didn't use to go to the library when I was a kid because in my town where I used to live in my childhood, there was no library and to go to a library we had to travel almost 7 to 8 miles and that was a difficult task for me as a child.

After 'didn't', the base form of the verb 'use' should be used, not 'used'. Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the'. The phrase 'we have to travel' should be in past tense 'we had to travel' to maintain consistency. 'As being a child' is incorrect; it should be 'as a child'.

× No, I didn't used to go to library when I was a kid because in my town where I used to live in my childhood, there was no library and and to go to a library we have to travel almost 7 to 8 miles and that was a difficult task for me as being a child.

✓ No, I didn't use to go to the library when I was a kid because in my town where I used to live in my childhood, there was no library and to go to a library we had to travel almost 7 to 8 miles and that was a difficult task for me as a child.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' to specify the place. Also, 'and and' is a repetition error; one 'and' is sufficient.

× Chinese kids have habit of going to library very oftenly and because of small houses and no proper space for studying and preparations, they prefer going to library for studying and doing their stuff.

✓ Chinese kids have a habit of going to the library very often and because of small houses and no proper space for studying and preparations, they prefer going to the library for studying and doing their stuff.

'Oftenly' is not a correct adverb; the correct form is 'often'. Also, 'a habit' requires the indefinite article 'a'. 'Library' needs the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place.