图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法的な誤りや不自然な表現があります。例えば、「to study English and CPA examination」は「to study English and prepare for the CPA examination」のように修正すると自然です。また、文をもう少し詳しくして、なぜ図書館に行くのか理由を加えると良いでしょう。

範例: Yes, I often go to the library to study English and prepare for the CPA examination because it provides a quiet environment that helps me concentrate.

建議: 回答が不明瞭で文法的にも誤りが多いです。話が途切れているため、内容が伝わりにくいです。質問に対して直接的に答え、文を簡潔にまとめることが必要です。接続詞を使って文をつなげ、具体的な活動内容を説明しましょう。

範例: I usually study English vocabulary and read books to prepare for the USCPA exams because it helps me improve my knowledge and skills.

建議: 時制の使い方に誤りがあります。「have not visited」ではなく「did not visit」が適切です。また、「did not interested」も「was not interested」に直す必要があります。理由をもう少し詳しく説明すると良いでしょう。

範例: Actually, I did not visit the library when I was a kid because I was not interested in reading books in public places.

建議: 回答が不明瞭で文法的に誤りが多いです。「I don't make sure about this team」は「I'm not sure about this topic」に修正し、文を整理して意味を明確にしましょう。また、比較の表現も正確に使う必要があります。

範例: I'm not sure about this topic, but I have heard that many Chinese kids study more than Japanese kids, so they might go to the library more often.

× Yes, I often go to the library and to study English and CPA examination.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library to study English and prepare for the CPA examination.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'and to study' which disrupts the parallel structure. The corrected sentence uses the infinitive form 'to study' and adds 'prepare for' to correctly express the activities. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Hmm I usually study English and with vocabulary and books and study to prepare for Prepare for USCPA exams and where?

✓ Hmm, I usually study English vocabulary and books to prepare for the USCPA exams.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains redundant and misplaced words like 'and with' and repeated 'Prepare for'. The correction removes unnecessary conjunctions and clarifies the sentence structure for better understanding.

× Actually I have not visited library because I did not interested in reading books in public.

✓ Actually, I have not visited the library because I was not interested in reading books in public.

The phrase 'did not interested' is incorrect; the past tense of 'be interested' requires 'was not interested'. Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the'. The correction fixes verb tense and article usage.

× I don't make sure about this team and but I hear that many Chinese and kids study more than Japanese people. Japanese.

✓ I'm not sure about this topic, but I hear that many Chinese kids study more than Japanese kids.

The phrase 'I don't make sure' is incorrect; 'I'm not sure' is the correct expression. 'This team' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'this topic'. Also, 'Chinese and kids' is incorrect; it should be 'Chinese kids'. The correction addresses pronoun and word choice errors for clarity.