图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Use present tense consistently and avoid repeating the same idea. Try to make your answer more natural and concise by combining sentences and using linking words.

範例: Yes, I often go to the library because it helps me learn new things. Whenever I have doubts, I visit the library to find books that clarify my questions.

建議: Your answer has good content but some sentences are unclear and contain grammatical mistakes. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. Also, correct verb forms and articles will improve clarity.

範例: In the library, I usually focus on studying and searching for new information or ideas that can help me improve. Especially when exams are near, I visit the library more often to prepare better.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use past tense consistently and improve sentence structure. Also, avoid vague phrases and be more specific.

範例: Honestly, when I was a kid, my middle school did not have a library. We usually studied on our own or used the Internet, which was quite popular during my childhood.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Avoid irrelevant information and focus on answering the question directly. Use correct sentence structures and linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: Although I have never been to China, my friends who visited there told me that Chinese kids often go to the library because they are eager to learn new things, including subjects and history.

× Whenever I get doubts, I went to the library and search for the book.

✓ Whenever I have doubts, I go to the library and search for the book.

The sentence mixes present tense 'get' with past tense 'went' and present tense 'search'. To maintain consistency and correct tense usage, 'get' should be 'have' (present tense), 'went' should be 'go' (present tense), and 'search' remains as is. This ensures the sentence correctly describes habitual actions in the present.

× It helps us to learn new things.

✓ It helps me to learn new things.

The pronoun 'us' is plural, but the speaker is referring to their own experience, so 'me' (singular) is appropriate here to match the subject.

× Whenever my examination are nearer, I will oftenly visit library.

✓ Whenever my examinations are nearer, I will often visit the library.

The noun 'examination' should be plural 'examinations' to agree with 'are'. Also, 'oftenly' is incorrect; the correct adverb is 'often'. Additionally, 'library' needs the definite article 'the'.

× It's really helpful for library.

✓ It's really helpful for the library.

The noun 'library' is a specific place here, so it requires the definite article 'the' before it.

× I usually not go to library.

✓ I usually did not go to the library.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'usually not go' in present tense. Since the context is past, 'did not go' is correct. Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the'.

× We used to study on our own or an Internet.

✓ We used to study on our own or on the Internet.

The preposition 'on' is correct before 'our own' and should also be used before 'the Internet'. Also, 'Internet' requires the definite article 'the'.

× Whenever my examination are nearer, I will oftenly visit library.

✓ Whenever my examinations are nearer, I will often visit the library.

The noun 'examination' should be plural 'examinations' to agree with the plural verb 'are'. Also, 'library' requires the definite article 'the'.

× So I they were telling that Chinese kids are frequently go library because they are eager to learn new things and the subject as well as new history.

✓ So they were telling me that Chinese kids frequently go to the library because they are eager to learn new things and subjects as well as new history.

The pronouns 'I they' are incorrect and should be separated. 'They were telling me' is correct. Also, 'go library' needs the preposition 'to' and 'subject' should be plural 'subjects' to match the context.

× the subject as well as new history.

✓ subjects as well as new history.

The noun 'subject' should be plural 'subjects' to match the plural context of learning multiple topics.